Pam Deremer Poet I do not know?

Nature's Own

She walks barefoot in total harmony...
on her mossy forest path.
The tall trees bow their limbs before her.
Her eye's twinkle a hello to each while passing by.
Her long, dark hair braided with ivy...
drapes down over her shoulders,
as the full moon gently caresses her bare skin...
causing a soft glow to form around her.
It is midnight, as she enters a meadow.
Joining her is her brother the wolf and her
sister the owl. Now with just a wave of her hand, the
wolf howls into the night...which
echos among the trees.
Sets of yellow eyes can now be seen all
along the edge of the meadow.
Without fear or doubt she calls to her
ancestors for enlightenment.
Their answers come in the whispering of the trees.
She gives thanks by placing sage and other
herbs into the earth.
She is one with the elements...a natural born witch.


                        P.R.Deremer

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Joan Donnelly Ellis October 21, 2015 at 9:05 AM Really enjoyed this Pam

Thomas Martin October 15, 2015 at 4:32 PM Wonderful, Pam! Wonderful expression and imagery! a 7 at least. Pam Deremer October 16, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thank you very much.

Cherl Dunn October 6, 2015 at 5:26 PM Dear Pam So the same question is posed at you now, feel free to answer as you wish, my new friend, cheri Pam Deremer October 7, 2015 at 12:42 PM Up until a few years back I hadn't written at all. Then due to an accident at work and my Parkinsons. I retired as a nurse of 20 years. It was a tough pill to swallow. You've heard of the saying that sometimes when you lose one ability, another takes it's place. That's what happened. I have 2 books published and are on Amazon but they aren't poetry books.

Cherl Dunn October 6, 2015 at 5:25 PM Dear Pam You asked if it comes naturally, the only way I can answer that is by saying I've been writing scense I was in the third grade, at first it was just a hobby but later it became more, now it's something I really love doing, and my greatest wish is to be someday published and earning a nice living at it, you know how they say only the fortunate few can have a job that they enjoy, while others take what they can get, well I want to be one of the fortunate few, lol cheri

Cherl Dunn October 6, 2015 at 4:51 PM Dear Pam Glad you enjoy my Halloween poetry, I love to write these even if it takes a few days of my summer away, I just put them aside until October, again thank you, cheri

Cherl Dunn October 5, 2015 at 9:10 PM Thank you for your cool and awesome comment I enjoy doing these haunted poems, expecially the classics, I'll give you a heads up my new friend tomorrow Will be my Vampires, a two day themed special but don't spread it around, lol take care and have a spooky nights sleep, just kidding, cheri Pam Deremer October 5, 2015 at 9:16 PM oh neat ! I will keep it hush hush. My cats will keep it under their fur too. lol

James Horn October 4, 2015 at 8:04 PM PRD, Was it witch hazel to rub on nature's soft skin or hazel eyes trying to make up which color they are? Aren't there both good and bad witches? Jim Horn Pam Deremer October 4, 2015 at 8:21 PM Yes there are good and bad in everything, positive and negative. The universe is made up of both.

Norberto Franco Cisneros October 3, 2015 at 6:00 PM Pam, thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Just read some of your own and I have to say I'm impressed with the images you paint.

Cherl Dunn October 2, 2015 at 4:12 PM Dear Pam Love this my sister elemental, awesome the ending is subperb, wow girl this is excellence in poetry, love it to the point of a seven my dear friend, cheri and also thanks for the review of my poem also glad you enjoyed it so much take care and have a wonderful weekend. Pam Deremer October 2, 2015 at 5:46 PM Thank you for your wonderful comment and you have a wonderful weekend too!

Jo Hayton October 2, 2015 at 3:42 PM Love this, it's beautifully written and kept me captivated xxx Pam Deremer October 2, 2015 at 3:52 PM Thank you!

Eileen Manassian October 2, 2015 at 2:18 PM Very captivating write, Pam. I didn't expect that ending. I kept reading to find out who this person was. Intriguing. Thanks for your visit to my work. Pam Deremer October 2, 2015 at 3:13 PM Your welcome and thank you for reading my work.