Nature's Music

graceful softly sound
    envolving unique moments
                      to be remembered

                      the nature's music
     all day long to be listened 
for heartless people

great piece that is played
    ~best musicians on the stage~
                     for an empty room

absenceblessingconfidencededicationfeelingshaiku

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Bill Baker

October 6, 2023 at 5:11 PM

Powerful Haikus, Maria. the photo of the violinist playing to the setting sun is a beautiful thought to have. It was very soothing to think of. Thanks for sharing. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

October 7, 2023 at 1:59 AM

Thank you Bill. Glad you liked it. Have a great weekendxxx

Ink Empress

October 3, 2023 at 1:46 AM

Best musicians yes, nature has a song and tale for every soul, to read and listen to. I absolutely love the smoothness of your words and depth of this. Stunning

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

October 3, 2023 at 1:59 AM

I do agree Ink. But we dont pay too much attention. Thanks for your lovely comment. Blessings...!

Victor Buhagiar

October 3, 2023 at 1:28 AM

Great contrasts in these haikus. Like especially the playing of music to an empty hall. Reminded of Andre Rieu playing to some Eastern country and hardly a clap was to be heard.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

October 3, 2023 at 1:40 AM

You are right. Nowadays, nobody listen to important things. Thank you very much Victor. Hugs