Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Haiku

Nature's Liveliness

White to bluish skies
Lively glows: trees and buds
       Picture of vibrancy

       Fresh, clean waters
 Fishes swimming alive, see!
          Ripples of life

       Cool gust of breeze
 Blowing rustling earthly life
        A wane of touch

     Fruits and each youth
     Productivity emblems
        Nurture's effect

       Chirping of birds
Twitting, singing on the tree
       Nature's melody


written by:
olive_eloi
1:34 am
02/18/2014

motif: nature
contest: Impress me with a small poem written in February or March 2014!
sponsor: Giorgio A. V.
2nd place

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James Fraser December 4, 2014 at 1:31 PM I love this series of Haiku. The images are abundantly clear when I read your words. Short forms do entice the reader to use imagination. Nice one Olive, James :)x

Casarah Nance June 5, 2014 at 10:01 PM Beautiful pictures you have painted with your words, Oh what a great melody nature dancing to and you have described it well :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 3:50 PM oh thanks Casarah.. :) thank you for yur kind words.. :) i love nature.. :)

Skat A March 29, 2014 at 4:14 PM nice win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2014 at 1:44 PM Thanks much Skat.. :)

Christopher Thor Britt March 23, 2014 at 11:18 PM Olive. Congratulations on your winning placement in Giorgio's contest. Blessings! /l\ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 24, 2014 at 3:46 AM thank you for another drop and comment from you.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 23, 2014 at 9:14 PM Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2014 at 1:40 PM Thank you so much sir. GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2014 at 2:58 PM - Olive, congratulations on your fine winning poem in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 22, 2014 at 3:15 PM thank you Anne Lise :)... to God be the glory.. :)

Mohammad Abedin February 20, 2014 at 12:21 AM nice to read. visit my posts Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 19, 2014 at 6:48 AM thanks .. to GOd be the greater glory..:)