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Nature's Liveliness

White to bluish skies Lively glows: trees and buds Picture of vibrancy Fresh, clean waters Fishes swimming alive, see! Ripples of life Cool gust of breeze Blowing rustling earthly life A wane of touch Fruits and each youth Productivity emblems Nurture's effect Chirping of birds Twitting, singing on the tree Nature's melody written by: olive_eloi 1:34 am 02/18/2014 motif: nature contest: Impress me with a small poem written in February or March 2014! sponsor: Giorgio A. V. 2nd place

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James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2014 1:31:00 PM

I love this series of Haiku. The images are abundantly clear when I read your words. Short forms do entice the reader to use imagination. Nice one Olive, James :)x

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/5/2014 10:01:00 PM

Beautiful pictures you have painted with your words, Oh what a great melody nature dancing to and you have described it well :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 3:50:00 PM

oh thanks Casarah.. :) thank you for yur kind words.. :) i love nature.. :)

Skat A

Date: 3/29/2014 4:14:00 PM

nice win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/27/2014 1:44:00 PM

Thanks much Skat.. :)

Christopher Thor Britt

Date: 3/23/2014 11:18:00 PM

Olive. Congratulations on your winning placement in Giorgio's contest. Blessings! /l\

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/24/2014 3:46:00 AM

thank you for another drop and comment from you.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2014 9:14:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/27/2014 1:40:00 PM

Thank you so much sir. GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2014 2:58:00 PM

- Olive, congratulations on your fine winning poem in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/22/2014 3:15:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise :)... to God be the glory.. :)

Mohammad Abedin

Date: 2/20/2014 12:21:00 AM

nice to read. visit my posts

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/19/2014 6:48:00 AM

thanks .. to GOd be the greater glory..:)