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Nature's Imbalance

A monster unleashed
man, nature crucial crossroads 
angels watch and weep

natural disasterspeoplesenryu

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Jimmy Anderson

May 12, 2010 at 4:25 PM

2nd Place Win! Enjoy! I wanna see more of this PB! Love, JAM

Barbara Gorelick

May 4, 2010 at 11:44 PM

Well done Audrey, congrats on your win. I think your take on the pic was perfect. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 4, 2010 at 8:14 PM

Congrats for the 2nd place.

John Freeman

May 4, 2010 at 6:07 PM

Congratulations Audrey, an excellant take on the photo. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

May 4, 2010 at 5:39 PM

Love this man vs nature idea!! Great writing, Audrey! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 4, 2010 at 5:31 PM

Congrats Audrey on your winning poem in this contest.. great words to describe the photo .. enjoy my BBF ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

May 4, 2010 at 4:50 PM

Super writing, Audrey. Congratulations on taking second place in the contest. Karen and I both loved your poem! Love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

May 4, 2010 at 1:33 PM

angels unleashed to destroy. jhl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 3, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Your title really fits so well with this senryu, sad how this imbalance is still going on...best of luck in the contest Audrey :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 3, 2010 at 2:14 PM

Wow what a wonderful depiction of that awesome photo... good luck in the contest... winner winner written on this "beauty" with luv ..from the "Sweetheart"

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

May 1, 2010 at 9:25 PM

Man can indeed be quite a monster toward nature. Nature also has frightening elements at times, but it is part of a balance. Great Senryu, Audrey. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.