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Natures Haven

in one heart's haven
     nature rests eternally...
     God's grace in whispers

     Form H  Poetry Contest
     02/15/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 12:15 AM
...so beautiful Charlie, I adore every word. a fave 7+ lynnxxx
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Thank you Lynn...
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 4:54 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:37 PM
Thank you Jan...
Callus Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on this fine win, Charlie! In my opinion, merited a higher placing. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:37 PM
I've resigned myself to the notion that I never expect to place very high in these things. I enter mainly because they present a theme to write about instead of trying to come up a subject matter on my. Own...I value your opinion very much Paul, thank you.
Bradfield Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations, Charlie! Very nicely done!!
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Thank you Larry
La France Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Charlie congratulations on your win in my contest with this great write and I love the image too
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Thank you BW...
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February 18, 2017 at 12:14 PM
My heart's its haven too, Charlie! Sorry you found At the Morgue "brutal". I meant it to be dark humor. Thanks for the stop by. / M
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Maurice, I was kidding with the brutal comment...
Poteet Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 10:19 AM
comforting thoughts, Charlie, congratulations on your win, but more on your piece. Reminiscent of the the still small voice which spoke to Elijah.
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Hadn't thought of that, but you're right, thanks for your encouragement...
Delaney Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations, Charlie: I always find solace in nature. Your words capture this succinctly, and you have captured a new reader. Hugs, SuZ
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Always room for a new friend Suzanne, welcome and thank you...
Krampe Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 8:00 AM
That last line is marvelous, Charlie. Congrats on your placement. I
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thank you Agnes and the same to you...
Roper Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 10:45 PM
This is so lovely, God has really blessed us with his beautiful creation. Hugs
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Yes he has, thank you Eve...
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Just love that last line, God's grace in whispers. So beautiful.
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thank you my friend...
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Enjoyed reading your spiritual based work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Always a pleasure to read new work. Thank you so much for returning the favor...
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February 16, 2017 at 1:44 PM
A heavenly haven Charlie...great H form...and I was kinda hoping you were a girl lol...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Sorry to disappoint, thanks WW...
Leiser Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 10:12 PM
Love the message in this profound and lovely haiku, Charlie! Great poem :)
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Thank You Laura...
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February 15, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Stellar haiku.
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thanks Cadet...
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Beautiful Charlie.
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Tim...
Green Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 5:22 PM
This one felt nice to read. Beautifully written my friend.
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thanks Chris...
Rycroft Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:48 PM
Great words Charlie x
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Wendy...
Rycroft Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Great words Charlie x
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:29 PM
very beautiful Charlie:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Jan...
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February 15, 2017 at 2:05 PM
- ... Sigh ... yes, really beautiful Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Stay warm Anne-Lise, thank you...
Sands Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful Charlie. I love it :)
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 2:10 PM
You are so kind, thank you Heidi...
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