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"May I sleep under your emerald-umber arms in serenity of your over." quote _by Poet Titillating gently does the breeze move Through pink cherry blossoms, brought fragrance Spring's best Pastel weeds lull and swept away, rise, mingle, and bend, Flourish and grow beauties, and an expression often quite profound The pensive wandering clear river flows surrounded by a throng of admirable melodic trees and underbrush Creating an aura of love, even the hardest of rocks White herons fly through and nest on the river’s shoulders A peace and sleep will come to yield Beavers gnawing through vegetation building dams As the night starts to creep up with stealthy footsteps Concealing the tiredness of the anxious waiting light blue sky Graying clouds nudge the crescent moon Light streams though darken shadows of the trees 7/16/2021 Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France emerald-umber= umbrella

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Date: 8/17/2021 8:26:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look beautiful, well done. I like your created quote also ~Constance
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:36:00 PM
Congrats, Eve! I love cherry blossoms. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful images Eve - "river's shoulders," "melodic trees," "graying clouds nudge the crescent moon." This write overflows with stunning, creative, images as we walk through your scene with you. Wonderful to see this on the winners list. Congratulations and blessings!
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Sam, for a wonderful inspiring compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/13/2021 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I love your line, "Through pink cherry blossoms, brought fragrance Spring's best." I love the pink cherry blossoms. They smell so sweet as they cover the ground in a pink blanket. Today, be blessed..................
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Paula, for a wonderful inspiring compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/13/2021 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved top win Eve. You deserve it with this great poem. The imagery, metaphors, and exquisite poetic lines were very attractive. blessings
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, for a wonderful inspiring compliment and the congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/13/2021 8:11:00 AM
A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for the compliment and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/21/2021 8:45:00 PM
So peaceful, lovely and serene, Eve. Nature is so gentle, that it's no wonder the most peaceful times are spent in its embrace. :) Evelyn
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/20/2021 11:45:00 AM
Eve, this is a gem, you describe nature at its best whatever or wherever! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer, for a wonderful inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/19/2021 5:49:00 PM
A remarkable glimpse into nature at rest, at work, at play. Wonderful, Eve! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon, for a wonderful inspiring compliment . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/19/2021 10:11:00 AM
No one does nature better than you. A truly enjoyable read. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Richard, for a wonderful inspiring compliment . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/18/2021 7:00:00 PM
What beautiful imagery here Eve. Absolutely lovely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Judy, for a wonderful inspiring compliment . Hugs Eve
Date: 7/18/2021 3:27:00 AM
Great imagery throughout... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/17/2021 11:57:00 AM
I can see the artist in your coming out for this amazing poem Eve, all the best in the contest and in life xo
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Date: 7/18/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Mystic, hugs
Date: 7/17/2021 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful and captivating, just like the nature that you portray, Eve:)
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Date: 7/17/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, nature is so captivating
Date: 7/17/2021 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Nature continues to inspire! A round of applause for you dear Eve! ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/17/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thank you , Paul , nature always inspires me. Hugs and
Date: 7/17/2021 2:05:00 AM
Youve captured natures beauty well in your verse Eve. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:09:00 PM
Graying clouds nudge the crescent moon : what a stimulating personification. A lovely poem. Sure to rank high. Thank you, Eve for sharing.
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Date: 7/16/2021 9:42:00 PM
This is nature at its best. Well indented and rhymed. Can see it will rate high. Hugs.
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