Nature's Games

Playing "Hide and Seek" Shadow hiding dawn till dusk Suns futile efforts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 10, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Excellent Haiku Abe, a scene i would love to view>>James
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June 30, 2009 at 3:00 PM
This just makes me happy to read!! I love the unusual way you have taken this picture and made it joyful ! ps (Thank you again, Abe, for the honor today!)
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June 30, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Its nice to see you again Abe with Your new haiku!Whereve you been?!True to the talent as alwais-->Loving the concept=)
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June 30, 2009 at 12:41 PM
Great image of the sun poking through the scenery to leave its tracks on the earth. Very nice, Abe! Love, Carolyn
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June 30, 2009 at 12:12 PM
You've got me smiling with this one. It reminds me of childhood. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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