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'nature's Finery and Me'

Rain 
awash 
arouse me
spinning around
nature’s splendor and my dance of freedom


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Contest : Best Rain Poem
3rd Place

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Tahera Mannan

July 18, 2011 at 9:25 PM

Sensual and beautiful Wilma. Many congrats for this win.

Don Johnson

July 18, 2011 at 3:50 PM

great verse babe, from johnson's slave :)

Elaine George

July 18, 2011 at 10:05 AM

Beautiful Tetractys, wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

July 17, 2011 at 10:52 PM

great etheree, wilms! sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 17, 2011 at 3:43 PM

I so remember this refreshing one, missy :) so happy to share 3rd spot with you :D Super congrats & mwahugs :D

Lee Ramage

July 17, 2011 at 3:28 PM

Congratulations on your win. lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 17, 2011 at 8:18 AM

My congratulations on the third place win, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

July 17, 2011 at 7:17 AM

A beautiful write and win for you my dear Wilma.. Congrats!!! love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 17, 2011 at 7:14 AM

Congrats Wilma on this elegant win with this stellar sultry piece .. remember reading before and same effect.. dynamite luv..enjoy..

Poet Destroyer A

July 17, 2011 at 2:25 AM

Wilma, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 19, 2011 at 8:39 AM

thankxx Wilma for your many sweet comments so encouraging luv.. have a wonderful day .filled with joy and luv my friend..

Michael J. Falotico

June 17, 2011 at 3:48 PM

Two glasses of wine on that bridge across in the rain.... sound good??..... luv Michael

James Foulk

June 17, 2011 at 1:45 PM

Wilma this was a wonderful piece of great poetry.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

June 17, 2011 at 9:58 AM

WILMA, HI, AM BACK AND BETTER

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2011 at 8:20 PM

oh, forget what I just said, You already did another one, between the sheets! You are just really enjoying doing this form!

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2011 at 8:19 PM

this is really nice, Wilma. Comparing rain to a dance of freedom. Just in case this is for the contest, be aware you need to do a second reverse one beneath this one. (I think I got that right). Love this!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2011 at 6:13 PM

lovely visual Wilma and is this form not catchy? once u use it u want to continue writing in it as a challenge and u have met it nicely my friend.. may I join u in this splendid dance?

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 16, 2011 at 2:09 PM

beautiful passionate piece, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

June 16, 2011 at 1:30 PM

Your eloquent poem has a joyful ring to it, Wilma. I love rain too and now I'm picturing you "spinning around" enjoying it as you dance. Lovely!

Carrie Richards

June 16, 2011 at 12:43 PM

There is a picture of joy created in this piece! Loved it!!

Jack Horne

June 16, 2011 at 11:06 AM

I can almost see you dancing in the rain, Wilma : ) Lovely write.

Kash Poet

June 16, 2011 at 10:32 AM

Such a refreshing write this one is Wilma..enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 16, 2011 at 8:04 AM

I reckon it's raining over there? haha you probably need it after the steamy tetractys that I just read from you ;) go dance in the rain for me missy :D mwahugs, really like that last line!

Wilma Neels

June 16, 2011 at 8:26 AM

:D it wasn't steamy at all!! Or was it? lol *p and yep it is raining hehe

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