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Nature's Elixir

Silky smooth with taste sublime,
a creamy dream, you’ll lose your mind.
As twilight comes, her beauty shines...
This brew is sure to satisfy.

It quenches all of man’s desires,
fierce thirst induced by inner fires,
spent bodies aching to conspire
with all that leads them ever higher.

A dream, yet such a simple notion;
one sip, gears primed are set in motion
transporting bliss, fervent emotion;
nature’s elixir ~ love’s finest potion.


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10/16/19
For Love Potion Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Chris Green October 17, 2019 at 7:03 AM The flow of this poem was as smooth as a rose petal in the accompanying photo. Soft, sensual and delightful. Nature's elixir, merely just the scent will start hearts beating at a rapid pace as this poem did to mine. This was beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. Hello There October 17, 2019 at 10:29 AM :) Love those comments ~ thanks, Chris :)

Vijay Pandit October 17, 2019 at 6:25 AM Beautiful, evocative of love in tender rhymes..well written, HT..all the best. Hello There October 17, 2019 at 10:23 AM Thank you, sweet Vijay.

Regina Mcintosh October 17, 2019 at 12:09 AM Wow... such a strong potion - instead of a love potion, if it's that strong, it would be my morning coffee. You did a wonderful job and I wish you big wins. Bless you, Gina Hello There October 17, 2019 at 12:22 AM LOL. I'm sure a little of this would jumpstart your day alright ;) Thanks, my friend :)

Quoth Theraven October 16, 2019 at 11:00 PM Hello Hello, I like this elixir you've whipped up in this poem. t want an IV drip, stat! -Richard Hello There October 16, 2019 at 11:18 PM LOL. hehehe ~ Thanks, Richard :)

Sandra Adams October 16, 2019 at 7:28 PM wonderful penning my friend, if this is for the love potion contest, i think you nailed it...Excellent poem! :) hugs Hello There October 16, 2019 at 7:45 PM Thank you so very much, my friend :) hugs

Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 7:02 PM Hello There, awesome poem. Well penned with beautiful rhythm. Hello There October 16, 2019 at 7:44 PM Thank you so much, Line :)