Nature's Elixir

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Silky smooth with taste sublime, a creamy dream, you’ll lose your mind. As twilight comes, her beauty shines... This brew is sure to satisfy. It quenches all of man’s desires, fierce thirst induced by inner fires, spent bodies aching to conspire with all that leads them ever higher. A dream, yet such a simple notion; one sip, gears primed are set in motion transporting bliss, fervent emotion; nature’s elixir ~ love’s finest potion. ~~~~~~~~~~ 10/16/19 For Love Potion Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Chris Green

Date: 10/17/2019 7:03:00 AM

The flow of this poem was as smooth as a rose petal in the accompanying photo. Soft, sensual and delightful. Nature's elixir, merely just the scent will start hearts beating at a rapid pace as this poem did to mine. This was beautiful. Best wishes in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 10:29:00 AM

:) Love those comments ~ thanks, Chris :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/17/2019 6:25:00 AM

Beautiful, evocative of love in tender rhymes..well written, HT..all the best.

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 10:23:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Vijay.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/17/2019 12:09:00 AM

Wow... such a strong potion - instead of a love potion, if it's that strong, it would be my morning coffee. You did a wonderful job and I wish you big wins. Bless you, Gina

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 12:22:00 AM

LOL. I'm sure a little of this would jumpstart your day alright ;) Thanks, my friend :)