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Silky smooth with taste sublime, a creamy dream, you’ll lose your mind. As twilight comes, her beauty shines... This brew is sure to satisfy. It quenches all of man’s desires, fierce thirst induced by inner fires, spent bodies aching to conspire with all that leads them ever higher. A dream, yet such a simple notion; one sip, gears primed are set in motion transporting bliss, fervent emotion; nature’s elixir ~ love’s finest potion. ~~~~~~~~~~ 10/16/19 For Love Potion Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Date: 10/17/2019 7:03:00 AM
The flow of this poem was as smooth as a rose petal in the accompanying photo. Soft, sensual and delightful. Nature's elixir, merely just the scent will start hearts beating at a rapid pace as this poem did to mine. This was beautiful. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 10/17/2019 10:29:00 AM
:) Love those comments ~ thanks, Chris :)
Date: 10/17/2019 6:25:00 AM
Beautiful, evocative of love in tender rhymes..well written, HT..all the best.
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Date: 10/17/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Vijay.
Date: 10/17/2019 12:09:00 AM
Wow... such a strong potion - instead of a love potion, if it's that strong, it would be my morning coffee. You did a wonderful job and I wish you big wins. Bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/17/2019 12:22:00 AM
LOL. I'm sure a little of this would jumpstart your day alright ;) Thanks, my friend :)
Date: 10/16/2019 11:00:00 PM
Hello Hello, I like this elixir you've whipped up in this poem. t want an IV drip, stat! -Richard
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Date: 10/16/2019 11:18:00 PM
LOL. hehehe ~ Thanks, Richard :)
Date: 10/16/2019 7:28:00 PM
wonderful penning my friend, if this is for the love potion contest, i think you nailed it...Excellent poem! :) hugs
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend :) hugs
Date: 10/16/2019 7:02:00 PM
Hello There, awesome poem. Well penned with beautiful rhythm.
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line :)

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