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Nature's Beauty

The reverie carries a renown reflection, like a flowing streamlet with torrents of the tributary holding onto its memoirs. Pebbles surface the shore like a lover encompassing the tides of a fluent dream. An aria of a tune is flowing with a silhouette of raptured cascades. I am astounded by its resounding magnificence. The peaks of the mounts hold such freedom and astonishing admiration. They fear not the wind nor rain, sturdy as an unyielding ascension of glory. creation’s marvel pigments of nature’s beauty breathtaking splendor The azure skies are engraved with grace. They capture a moment in time that only the Lord can create. I see nothing except the appeal of enticing magnetism. In the distance lies a chimera shadow of clouds leading to the abyss of heaven's gate. Monumental beauty and adorning refinement are portrayed. There is no fear for the wild, but devotion inside a piety of nature's bliss. I sense all things that bring overwhelming allure. Moments like this fascinate me beyond comprehension. entranced by candor unending moments of ease beguiled charisma May 7, 2018

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Date: 7/7/2018 5:31:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/6/2018 10:18:00 PM
Beautiful writing Laura, Congratulations on your win...Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/6/2018 9:40:00 PM
Great imagery , sunshine, haikus just as beautiful...Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/6/2018 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Such a beautiful haibun, masterful imagery and elegance. Well done!
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Date: 7/6/2018 5:35:00 AM
The plight of summer written in such a way it took me down that path, opened my eyes to all you guided your quill to portray, wonderfully portrayed too! Congratulations Luloo, a winner without a doubt. Many thanks for participating, Mick
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:04:00 AM
A nice write with 2 haikus...I guess it's called a Haibun...I like it...All the best Laura Loo
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:00:00 PM
A lovely rapture of words, dear Luloo!
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:40:00 PM
You are a master of arranging words to beautify what you see. "There is no fear for the wild, but devotion inside a piety of nature's bliss." Love it.
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
Absolutely beautifully written Laura ! :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 8:07:00 AM
aww thank you sweet Heidi!! :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2018 8:07:00 AM
aww thank you sweet Heidi!! :)-luloo

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