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Nature Will Go On No Matter What It Will Evolve

Immortal land awakes through dusk and dawn Beneath ceiling spun sugar and midnight blue. Wind's breath trill of tiny song accrues through ardent woodlands, rivers, and natures gentle fawns. Tears of life stream with allure and glamor Dreams grow draping over nature's life in each Branches newly bereft of leaves, tips reach Gilded sunrise bonding souls and laughter Ocean's emotion echoes deep shifting realm Its grace untouchable in its deepest depth As it attains its greatest heavens breadth ancient secrets adhered on coral helm
3/15/2017
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Duet Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Congrats, Eve, on this oh so lovely poem.
Callus Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Beautiful imagery projected through words and aided by the accompanying gif. Nature is such a vast source of inspiration! ~ Congratulations on placing first, Eve. Hugs // paul
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well-written rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed this.
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your top win.
Leiser Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Lovely imagery of nature's beauty that you've painted here in your fine poem, Eve! Congrats on your win :)
White Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Eve, I am awed, how wonderful.... And that picture is so great with the poem too. Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Darren, congratulations to you as well for a great poem:-)
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 7:58 AM
perfect rhythm and rhyme! Loved this one Eve- you are so gifted with your lovely pen! congrats and thank you :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 12:17 AM
I absolutely love your poem! The read is fluid and, oh, so lovely. I also love the pic, the water moves!, and that captivated me, I didn't know pics could do that. All in all, this was a most enjoyable visit to your page. All the best ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Amazing tribute to nature dear, Eve, it is so beautiful and so skillfully written! A seven!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 7:15 PM
This is a stunning gift of poetry Eve! I so enjoyed reading it. The picture is also stunning! ; ) 7
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:12 PM
alluring indeed, Eve. A fine portrayal of nature you painted with words.
Pinet Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 2:41 PM
The allure of nature has captured your imagination and allowed you to be one with Her beauty. Emile
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:44 PM
Thank you so very much for the wonderful compliment. ~*
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 9:02 AM
this is beautiful, Eve. I see why you enjoy quatrains. Soupe for ya!
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Andrea ~*
Vinson Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 2:22 AM
Gave me goosebumps, Eve. : ) Dreamy, precise, stirring...
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback..... , Doug ~*
Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 1:55 AM
A wonderful poem, Eve! Love that last line. I believe that nature does speak to us, we just refuse to listen!
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Nature always speaking by rejuvenating insisting I always live
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