Constance La France Poet Tail-rhyme

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Nature the Giver

 
"Nature is an endless combination and repetition of a few laws."

_ Ralph Waldo Emerson

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The flowers voluntarily give all summer,
and nectar is taken by each whirling 'hummer.
And seeds fly in the wind !

The flowers and trees relinquish, bequeath their seeds,
we all could learn by doing and giving good deeds.
Be helpful and be kind !

The bees drift from each bloom and carry sweet nectar,
they are important and I am their protector.
Bees drinking is a find !

Give of self to a cause and become a giver,
without compensation- let good thoughts deliver.
Don't be "thank you" inclined !

In nature all things are connected by magic,
why in humanity do we find scenes tragic?
Let's be more nature twined ! 

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September 22, 2020


Poetry/Tail-rhyme/Nature the Giver
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1288-692-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the Premier contest, Givers
sponsor, Regina McIntosh

First place

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Linda Alice Fowler September 28, 2020 at 4:43 PM Lovely nature take Constance. Congratulations on the win! Linda Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 8:32 AM Linda, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations _Constance

Jeanne Mcgee September 27, 2020 at 10:12 AM A lovely message. congrats on your win. Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:35 AM Jeanne, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Paula Goldsmith September 27, 2020 at 9:37 AM Congratulations on your win. I am walking in your garden with the bees and flowers. So pretty. Enjoy your win and day........... Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:36 AM Paula, thanks for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance

Paghunda Zahid September 27, 2020 at 7:10 AM Congratulations on your win Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:36 AM Paghunda, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

Line Gauthier September 26, 2020 at 6:13 PM Congrats on your well deserved Gold, Constance. Beautifully penned ~ Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:37 AM Line, thank you so much the the congrats and the beautiful _Constance

Regina Mcintosh September 26, 2020 at 3:03 PM Congratulations on your winning poem. It is beautiful and captivating. i enjoyed it so much and am glad you choose to enter it. Many prayers and blessings sent your way! Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:38 AM Gina, thank you for another great contest and my placement and for the lovely comment _Constance

James Marshall Goff September 23, 2020 at 8:30 AM Yes Constance...have survived some emotional trauma lately...but my nature walks let me relax and enjoy all around me...Hornets have emerged here in Minnesota! one needs to be alert! Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:41 AM James, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, sorry for your emotional trauma, yes, nature is very calming and tranquil, I like to go outside early in the morning before the traffic begins and listen to the birds calling, I heard about those hornets _Constance

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2020 at 5:02 PM Love this, Constance. We often think of the negative like those stingers but your poem draws the blooms and sweet nectar! Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 8:43 AM Kim, thanks for the love and comment, my garden attracts a lot of bees. They usually are attracted to the followers but sometimes they come and check me out, but I would never kill one, I try to redirect it _Constance