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Nature the Destroyer

silt drys layered
packed, heated, plates collide bang
flings upright pegs

molten steam singes life
bones crushed down below surface
seed never more green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2014 5:45:00 AM
that is a very nice haiku, to have to coherent verses is difficult and you did so good
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Date: 4/21/2013 4:51:00 PM
lovely haiku
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:15:00 AM
Wow this is really good, enjoyed. good luck if for contest. harry
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Date: 3/11/2012 1:51:00 AM
yes..pretty.awesome.and deep...love it..pd
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