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Oh moon, be calm as you fade away from sight. Beat shaped in my heart, and the pulse is harder. Nature! Your artistic scenes outdo all heights. Venus smiled as the Moon blinked in her harbor. Stars made a pledge to upkeep the night sky bright. Ah, jealous moon, recall daffodils ardor. Shades splash in sapphire, arc's dazzling Edenic. Grace nature, your brushwork is bright and scenic.
Written: October 06, 2022

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Date: 10/8/2022 11:17:00 AM
I can see you have a special rapport with the moon, such beauty is exquisite. So is your poetry, :)
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Date: 10/8/2022 9:08:00 AM
Surely God smiles as you enervate (use up the world’s current pallet. Oh what new Edenic colors he might bring in your blessed garden. Blessings!
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Date: 10/7/2022 9:38:00 PM
Lasaad, you have used personification so vividy and skillfully. Janice
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Date: 10/7/2022 7:49:00 PM
Such natural, graceful beauty! I love the picture, too. A thrill to read, Lasaad. Have a nice weekend. :)
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Date: 10/7/2022 1:53:00 PM
Dazzling beauty, dearest Lasaad. Blessings, my friend!
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Date: 10/7/2022 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem Lasaad--well crafted my friend.
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Date: 10/6/2022 11:16:00 PM
You have sucked up all beauty in nature ! Spectacular and eye catching !
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Date: 10/6/2022 10:52:00 PM
Perfect poem, a beauty it is well to be read.
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Date: 10/6/2022 9:23:00 PM
This is really lovely! Is it in a challenge?
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:15:00 PM
I feel like I'm listening to Opera when I read your poetry. The richness and depth. Captivating!!
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