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Nature Sculpture

Oh moon, be calm as you fade away from sight.
Beat shaped in my heart, and the pulse is harder.
Nature! Your artistic scenes outdo all heights.
Venus smiled as the Moon blinked in her harbor.
Stars made a pledge to upkeep the night sky bright. 
Ah,  jealous moon, recall daffodils ardor.
Shades splash in sapphire, arc's dazzling Edenic.
Grace nature, your brushwork is bright and scenic.


Written: October 06, 2022

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Mystic Rose Rose October 8, 2022 at 11:17 AM I can see you have a special rapport with the moon, such beauty is exquisite. So is your poetry, :)

Kim Rodrigues October 8, 2022 at 9:08 AM Surely God smiles as you enervate (use up the world’s current pallet. Oh what new Edenic colors he might bring in your blessed garden. Blessings!

Janice Canerdy October 7, 2022 at 9:38 PM Lasaad, you have used personification so vividy and skillfully. Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 7, 2022 at 7:49 PM Such natural, graceful beauty! I love the picture, too. A thrill to read, Lasaad. Have a nice weekend. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 7, 2022 at 1:53 PM Dazzling beauty, dearest Lasaad. Blessings, my friend!

Vijay Pandit October 7, 2022 at 6:53 AM Beautiful poem Lasaad--well crafted my friend.

Valsa George October 6, 2022 at 11:16 PM You have sucked up all beauty in nature ! Spectacular and eye catching !

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2022 at 10:52 PM Perfect poem, a beauty it is well to be read.

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2022 at 9:23 PM This is really lovely! Is it in a challenge?

Becky Forbes October 6, 2022 at 7:15 PM I feel like I'm listening to Opera when I read your poetry. The richness and depth. Captivating!!