Nature Sculpts

polished stones glisten shaped by the passage of time water the sculptor
For the Flowing Water contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 9:33 PM
An excellent example of a haiku.
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Barbara
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 8:11 AM
This haiku brought back memories for me, Barbara, as I noted in my comment earlier. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love to my fellow LNC, Carolyn
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December 17, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Congrats BG on your HM in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Love how you called water a sculptor. Congrats on the winners' list, Barbara! LUv, Andrea
Pearson Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 10:32 AM
lovely poem
Neels Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Barbara your write reminds me of the Cango Caves in Oudtshoorn a little town outside of Cape Town, I can hear the water dripping down and visualise the shiny stones.. Brilliant, all the best for the contest
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December 16, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Hi Barbara. Thanks for your kind comment. You have created what I only dream of. Reading this , my first thought was,'I wish that I had written that. The very best of luck in the contest. Thanking you again, Eamon
Bono Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Thank you for reading.Hope you and your family a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
On the shore in NJ we used to find what appeared to be polished gems. In fact, they were just glass from bottles that had been sculpted by the sea. Brilliant imagery, dear LNC. Wishing you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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December 14, 2010 at 6:24 AM
This one is a beauty Barbara.Good luck for the contest-kashinath
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:42 PM
lovely entry, good luck in the contest
Mannan Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:03 PM
Beautiful image Barbara. All the very best for the contest.
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