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Nature Sculpts

polished stones glisten shaped by the passage of time water the sculptor For the Flowing Water contest

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Robert Pettit

Date: 12/27/2010 9:33:00 PM

An excellent example of a haiku.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, Barbara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:11:00 AM

This haiku brought back memories for me, Barbara, as I noted in my comment earlier. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love to my fellow LNC, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:32:00 AM

Congrats BG on your HM in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:12:00 PM

This is Excellent!!!CONGRATS TO YOU ~Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 10:05:00 PM

Love how you called water a sculptor. Congrats on the winners' list, Barbara! LUv, Andrea

Elton Pearson

Date: 12/16/2010 10:32:00 AM

lovely poem

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 7:45:00 AM

Barbara your write reminds me of the Cango Caves in Oudtshoorn a little town outside of Cape Town, I can hear the water dripping down and visualise the shiny stones.. Brilliant, all the best for the contest

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/16/2010 5:10:00 AM

Hi Barbara. Thanks for your kind comment. You have created what I only dream of. Reading this , my first thought was,'I wish that I had written that. The very best of luck in the contest. Thanking you again, Eamon

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/15/2010 5:01:00 PM

Thank you for reading.Hope you and your family a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:40:00 PM

On the shore in NJ we used to find what appeared to be polished gems. In fact, they were just glass from bottles that had been sculpted by the sea. Brilliant imagery, dear LNC. Wishing you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 12/14/2010 6:24:00 AM

This one is a beauty Barbara.Good luck for the contest-kashinath

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/13/2010 10:42:00 PM

lovely entry, good luck in the contest

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/13/2010 10:03:00 PM

Beautiful image Barbara. All the very best for the contest.