Joy Wellington Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Nature Prepares For Winter

Leaves have fallen down
Making colorful bed
Children hide and seek
Parents came with rake
Took the leafs away

Trees stand gawky 
Bare to the bones
No leaf for dress
Not intended

Season new
Welcome change
Birdies flew

From nest 
Empty

cold

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Sherese Gooden July 14, 2012 at 9:38 PM The visual appeal is great.

Fabiyas M V November 27, 2010 at 10:24 PM Common thought, but your pen has made it exceptional and sweet,Wellington

David Byrne November 27, 2010 at 9:18 PM Very atmospheric!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 27, 2010 at 8:16 PM This form is wonderful and u have utilized it so very well Joy with this brilliant piece on Nature and Winter .. enjoyed those birdies flying ..luv.. thankxx for your lovely comment on my poetry tonight .. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..

John Loving Iii November 27, 2010 at 7:10 PM the grace of God? now i know. don't let me brag about it. thankyou very much. i love you. john

Carolyn Devonshire November 25, 2010 at 9:55 AM Hi Joy, I'm sorry you had an experience with an alcoholic such as the one I described. It leaves you wondering how they truly feel. Have a wonderful week! Love, Carolyn

Constance La France November 25, 2010 at 9:38 AM Nature is preparing for winter, and there is such beauty in that change, even in that gawky are tree, I enjoyed reading your poem very much~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 25, 2010 at 7:55 AM thankxx Joy for your lovely comment.. enjoy a H.T. day luv with your luved ones..

Dr.Ram Mehta November 24, 2010 at 4:28 PM Happy thanksgiving day. Joy

Wilma Neels November 21, 2010 at 11:47 AM You captured the beauty of the changing of the seasons Joy.. Awesome write.. Hope your weekend is a good one, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 19, 2010 at 8:38 PM Very expressive Joy .. a treasure with vivid visuals and wonderful descriptive lines luv.. enjoyed tonight ..happy weekend with luv..

John Loving Iii November 18, 2010 at 7:32 AM tis the season. john

Poet Destroyer A November 16, 2010 at 10:08 PM well it sure is about that time, I love the cold lol, enjoyed your write tonight,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire November 16, 2010 at 6:53 PM Wow! What a wonderful, creative write, Joy. And I agree with what Dr. Ram said below. Winter finds creatures taking refuge indoors. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 16, 2010 at 3:53 PM Nature is prepared for the winter,the nests are empty, but the houses are full. Joy

Sena Slaughter November 16, 2010 at 1:50 PM Nice work on natures way of introducing us to winter. Thanks for sharing.