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Nature of Autumn

few colors, but green a Fall stand out spotty, the Southern reds beautifully shaped teeny, not trite the fallen up North, pleased by ample leaves the tumbler of hues crimson and gold over my shoes as if snow trees on both sides of the streets, a treat still, I know my yard will overflow raring to be raked slurried by depths piled on tarps pulled down slopes agonized over forgotten the sparkle the jumping pile of a cheering child

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Date: 10/30/2024 2:25:00 PM
I love poems about seasons and keeping memory of childhood joy. Yay for grandchildren who take us there too. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems. I like the conversation and finding out what connects. J :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2024 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette!
Date: 10/21/2024 6:49:00 PM
This is cute and has a happy ending. The trees provide joy for a child. I like the happiness and feel of an Autumn day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2024 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 10/21/2024 3:00:00 PM
Hello Kim, Autumn is a beautiful season. the colors are beautiful. Yet once the leaves fall to the ground we know we must rake them into piles then bring them to the dump. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 10:40:00 AM
Hello Kim, today it feels like summer and we began to rake leaves. it is a hot day here. Yes it is a nice time of the year. How are you? Enjoy your day. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2024 3:56:00 PM
We have so many leaves, but still it is a nice time of year. Thank you ~ Kim
Date: 10/21/2024 8:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Nature of Autumn" write. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful Autumn day......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2024 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 10/21/2024 8:49:00 AM
Deep and memorable, you always put yourself in the middle- love reading between the lines...<3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2024 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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