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Nature Mother

Nature Mother Like the gentle touch of a lamb is a summer rain That greens the ferns and perks faltering flowers, The soft roll of thunder saying rain is near, Receding when soothing drops start to fall. Hot winds hide away when soft mists appear, Nature showing her Mother side With her own tender tears

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David O'Haolin Whalen

Date: 9/3/2017 4:43:00 PM

exceptional free verse. I'm glad to see that it's getting the attention it so richly deserves. A genre not easily mastered.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/4/2017 9:40:00 AM

Thank you so very much.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/23/2017 4:31:00 PM

Wonderful free verse, Sunlite!:) Nature in general is just beyond beautiful!:) Well written! Be blessed!:) D.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/23/2017 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much. I treasure your comment.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/19/2017 11:25:00 PM

I adore this sunlite:) Your words are full of nurture, respect and are simply inspiring. A lullaby to warm and dream sweet dreams to. Lovely xo... a favourite fave

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/20/2017 10:02:00 AM

How nice of you, Lynn Marie. I really appreciate your comments and the fav.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2017 10:23:00 PM

This is a beauty, love the emotion and the imagery you have created in this poem. ~*

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:50:00 AM

Thank you!!!

Anita Harris

Date: 8/16/2017 9:55:00 PM

There is much to like about this poem--from alliteration to Mother Nature's tears. Enjoyed this very much!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for your helpful comment.

David O'Haolin Whalen

Date: 8/16/2017 8:50:00 PM

This is a genre I cannot do well at all. This seems seamless even in it's brevity. Well done Sunlite.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:54:00 AM

Thank you, David. I've been reading a book spasmodically called "The Celtic Way of Prayer."

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/16/2017 6:05:00 AM

So beautifully written--a tender delight!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2017 3:05:00 AM

- Summer thunder is refreshing after a hot day - A beautiful poem, Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:57:00 AM

I always think of Norway as cool all the time! Thank you, Sunshine.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/15/2017 10:36:00 PM

Hi Sunlite, a soft and tender tribute to gentle summer rain that refreshes and cools. Lovely imagery:)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Susan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/15/2017 7:43:00 PM

I love this Sunlite! I love refreshing rain. It cleans the air and the plants, sustaining them. You have given personalization to Mother Nature with your words. : )

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/17/2017 9:59:00 AM

I always appreciate you, Connie. Thank you.