Sunlite Wanter Poet Free verse

Nature Mother

Nature Mother

Like  the gentle touch of a lamb is a summer rain
That greens the ferns and perks faltering flowers,
The soft roll of thunder saying rain is near,
Receding when soothing drops start to fall.
Hot winds hide away when soft mists appear,
Nature showing her Mother side 
With her own tender tears

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David O'Haolin Whalen September 3, 2017 at 4:43 PM exceptional free verse. I'm glad to see that it's getting the attention it so richly deserves. A genre not easily mastered. Sunlite Wanter September 4, 2017 at 9:40 AM Thank you so very much.

Dorian Petersen Potter August 23, 2017 at 4:31 PM Wonderful free verse, Sunlite!:) Nature in general is just beyond beautiful!:) Well written! Be blessed!:) D. Sunlite Wanter August 23, 2017 at 6:18 PM Thank you so much. I treasure your comment.

Lynn Marie August 19, 2017 at 11:25 PM I adore this sunlite:) Your words are full of nurture, respect and are simply inspiring. A lullaby to warm and dream sweet dreams to. Lovely xo... a favourite fave Sunlite Wanter August 20, 2017 at 10:02 AM How nice of you, Lynn Marie. I really appreciate your comments and the fav.

Eve Roper August 16, 2017 at 10:23 PM This is a beauty, love the emotion and the imagery you have created in this poem. ~* Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:50 AM Thank you!!!

Anita Harris August 16, 2017 at 9:55 PM There is much to like about this poem--from alliteration to Mother Nature's tears. Enjoyed this very much! Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:51 AM Thank you for your helpful comment.

David O'Haolin Whalen August 16, 2017 at 8:50 PM This is a genre I cannot do well at all. This seems seamless even in it's brevity. Well done Sunlite. Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:54 AM Thank you, David. I've been reading a book spasmodically called "The Celtic Way of Prayer."

Vijay Pandit August 16, 2017 at 6:05 AM So beautifully written--a tender delight! Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:55 AM Thank you so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2017 at 3:05 AM - Summer thunder is refreshing after a hot day - A beautiful poem, Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:57 AM I always think of Norway as cool all the time! Thank you, Sunshine.

Susan Ashley August 15, 2017 at 10:36 PM Hi Sunlite, a soft and tender tribute to gentle summer rain that refreshes and cools. Lovely imagery:) Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you, Susan.

Connie Marcum Wong August 15, 2017 at 7:43 PM I love this Sunlite! I love refreshing rain. It cleans the air and the plants, sustaining them. You have given personalization to Mother Nature with your words. : ) Sunlite Wanter August 17, 2017 at 9:59 AM I always appreciate you, Connie. Thank you.