Nature Mis-Behaves

Thunder growls in the distance herald storms; Dark clouds sneaking across sky They’re up to no good.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 3:35 AM
- Forecasts are bad - The weather is incredible at this time of year, M.L - A great kimo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:18 AM
It's decent here this week; some showers but, not deluge like the past couple of weeks. Thanks so much.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:29 PM
That last whimsical line made me smile inside, M L. Beautiful imagery in this Kimo poem. Ty for giving us a full poetic measure of thoughtful brevity. Wonderful poetry. Love and smiles always.
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Thanks again, Freddie; I'm glad it made you smile.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:09 PM
I like how you pictured it in the kimo form.
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:20 AM
Thanks Andrea. I write whatever form I'm feeling within. Sometimes they work out just great.
Onclaud Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:04 PM
i can't count the many storms going on in all countries these days... greeat poem, M L.. huggs
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:21 AM
Yes, there seem to be a lot, lately. I use them to write poetry...providing that my house isn't blowing away. Thanks so much.
Rose  Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 10:52 AM
nature has a mind of her own, that's how disasters are sewn, oh, but it contains a gentle hand too. Thank God for that. Nice poem dear M.
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Yes, I agree; Mother Nature has her good and bad days, too. Thanks for stopping by.
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Love it, ML.
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, Line.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 7:02 AM
I love personification, this is wonderfully written!
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Ooh, thank you.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Ominous Kimo brilliantly written dear , MLK!
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Many thanks.
Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 1:09 AM
I just enjoyed this, lovely!
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:23 AM
I'm glad, Arthur and thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:45 PM
I love your personalization M.L. I am always talking to the weather. : )
Kiser Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 10:01 PM
Thank you Connie.
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