Andrea Dietrich Poet Quatern

Nature Lovers

Breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly
upon my neck, oh, how he pleases me!
Irises beneath long lashes gazing
down at me are gold-tinged and amazing.

Near moonlit water, on a beach are we,
breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly.
Our legs are intertwined; my cheek is pressed
against love’s rhythm beating in his chest.

His fingers trace the line along my spine
as stars peek down at us and brightly shine.
Breathing feather-whispers so lusciously,
caress us, Wind, before the night can flee!

Like ocean’s waves that come to kiss the land,
our passion mounts. Unbridled on the sand,
I give myself gladly and completely -
breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly.


Sept. 13, 2016
For Russell Sivey's' Choose A Topic' Contest: Love and Romance

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Line Gauthier April 17, 2018 at 12:34 AM Wow, such a beautiful and romantic poem, Andrea.

Eve Roper November 25, 2016 at 4:33 PM oh so romantic, Andrea,,, wonderful way to use the bodyparts hugs

Agnes Krampe October 9, 2016 at 8:43 PM Coming back with congratulations on your well deserved win. Agnes

CayCay Godwin October 9, 2016 at 6:22 PM Truly beautiful ... CayCay

Sunita U.D Palawon October 8, 2016 at 12:13 AM Great! 1st place winner wow. Well done Andrea! :)

Jan Allison October 7, 2016 at 5:11 PM Dropping back with my congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi October 7, 2016 at 4:08 PM Congratulations on your trophy win. Good going girl.

Curtis Johnson October 7, 2016 at 11:44 AM Congrats on your top win Andrea.

Alexis Y. October 7, 2016 at 11:43 AM WoW! Andrea, I see why you got the top spot. It is so well written and soooo romantic! Congrats on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Joseph May October 7, 2016 at 9:22 AM Congrats on a great win with this passionate write Andrea

Sandra Haight October 7, 2016 at 8:24 AM Very lovely, Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars October 7, 2016 at 7:54 AM beautifully written Andrea! well deserved placement lady! :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi October 7, 2016 at 4:35 AM Congrats Andrea, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Viv Wigley October 7, 2016 at 12:26 AM Bravo! Viv x

Keith Logan September 19, 2016 at 6:19 AM A beautifully seductive write. I like the imagery in this piece, finding it evocative of time and place.

Jennifer Walker September 18, 2016 at 11:44 PM Romantic Wonderwoman.

Carrie Richards September 17, 2016 at 12:17 PM I see number one written all over this gem! Gorgeous !!

Miraj Raha September 17, 2016 at 6:42 AM Oh how I've missed you, Andrea.*cries with joy*

Jenni Kalicharan September 16, 2016 at 8:58 PM Enchanting poem!! Makes me want to try a quatern.

Carol B. September 16, 2016 at 5:36 PM Breathtaking. Saving in my favs.

Maurice Yvonne September 15, 2016 at 4:30 PM WOW, WOW, WOW, a million times WOW! A super fav!

Sara Chansarkar September 15, 2016 at 12:10 PM This is the work of a master, Andrea! I wanted to go on reading this one forever! Many congratulations on POTD!

James Inman September 15, 2016 at 10:26 AM How wonderful Andrea, sensual and beautifully written. Such intensely emotional lines from an exceptional writer.

Afolabi Muideen September 15, 2016 at 6:20 AM This is a great and wonderful write, ma. Thanks for sharing..........A.M.

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2016 at 2:09 AM This is so lovely Andrea! I'm happy to see it got poem of the day. Congratulations! 7 ; )

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