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Breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly
upon my neck, oh, how he pleases me!
Irises beneath long lashes gazing
down at me are gold-tinged and amazing.

Near moonlit water, on a beach are we,
breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly.
Our legs are intertwined; my cheek is pressed
against love’s rhythm beating in his chest.

His fingers trace the line along my spine
as stars peek down at us and brightly shine.
Breathing feather-whispers so lusciously,
caress us, Wind, before the night can flee!

Like ocean’s waves that come to kiss the land,
our passion mounts. Unbridled on the sand,
I give myself gladly and completely -
breathing feather-whispers ever sweetly.


Sept. 13, 2016
For Russell Sivey's' Choose A Topic' Contest: Love and Romance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/17/2018 12:34:00 AM
Wow, such a beautiful and romantic poem, Andrea.
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Date: 11/25/2016 4:33:00 PM
oh so romantic, Andrea,,, wonderful way to use the bodyparts hugs
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Date: 10/9/2016 8:43:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations on your well deserved win. Agnes
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Date: 10/9/2016 6:22:00 PM
Truly beautiful ... CayCay
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Date: 10/8/2016 12:13:00 AM
Great! 1st place winner wow. Well done Andrea! :)
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Date: 10/7/2016 5:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2016 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Good going girl.
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:44:00 AM
Congrats on your top win Andrea.
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, I see why you got the top spot. It is so well written and soooo romantic! Congrats on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2016 9:22:00 AM
Congrats on a great win with this passionate write Andrea
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:24:00 AM
Very lovely, Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/7/2016 7:54:00 AM
beautifully written Andrea! well deserved placement lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/7/2016 4:35:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 10/7/2016 12:26:00 AM
Bravo! Viv x
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Date: 9/19/2016 6:19:00 AM
A beautifully seductive write. I like the imagery in this piece, finding it evocative of time and place.
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:44:00 PM
Romantic Wonderwoman.
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:17:00 PM
I see number one written all over this gem! Gorgeous !!
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:42:00 AM
Oh how I've missed you, Andrea.*cries with joy*
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:58:00 PM
Enchanting poem!! Makes me want to try a quatern.
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Date: 9/16/2016 5:36:00 PM
Breathtaking. Saving in my favs.
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Date: 9/15/2016 4:30:00 PM
WOW, WOW, WOW, a million times WOW! A super fav!
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Date: 9/15/2016 12:10:00 PM
This is the work of a master, Andrea! I wanted to go on reading this one forever! Many congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/15/2016 10:26:00 AM
How wonderful Andrea, sensual and beautifully written. Such intensely emotional lines from an exceptional writer.
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Date: 9/15/2016 6:20:00 AM
This is a great and wonderful write, ma. Thanks for sharing..........A.M.
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Date: 9/15/2016 2:09:00 AM
This is so lovely Andrea! I'm happy to see it got poem of the day. Congratulations! 7 ; )
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