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Nature in a Mischievous Mood

Nature in a Mischievous Mood

Early Sunday morning; 
nature rattling at the front door!
I accept its clamorous invitation 
stepping out with nothing more
in tow than an upturned collar..
and a theatrical imagination.

The morning ground is well-baked pastry,
all crusted with a shiver of winter;
sunlight whispering across the ground 
all sharp colour and playfulness.
So I step out, church bells skipping alongside
and light skating off in front of me.

Soon I am within reach of the beach;
my sandy sanctuary,
but nature is in a mischievous mood
the light fluctuating, 
its moods shifting,
gloss turning to flat matt.

The sea offers up a cold, blue arm 
encouraging me into watery depths
while the sky sits heavily
in a grey leather-weathered armchair.
Behind, peeking through a curtain of cloud 
a new season waits to spring into action.


Ian Souter



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Date: 8/13/2025 5:03:00 AM
Wow, that last stanza is a surprising personal view of the waiting season. I like the 'cold blue arm' of the sea with the three long vowels, and the 'leather-weathered armchair' with the avuncular tone and near-rhyme for the sky. Nice poem. J :)
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Ian Souter
Date: 8/13/2025 6:06:00 AM
Good Morning Jeanette, Many thanks for your thoughtful comments and delighted you enjoyed the poem. It is freshly minted and printed, in fact, so fresh that I have just changed the title! I enjoy nature and the option of, word fun and imagery, that poetry offers. It keeps the old brain active! Kind whatnots, Ian

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