Nature Heart

wonders of rainbows
light rays and raindrops in sight
nature heart insight


October 5th, 2018
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Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 6:22 PM
this one short and sweet! Thanks for seeing my poem today.
Williams Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Well said and done. Yes, nature has a true heart of its creator, The Lord Jesus Christ, with the Father and Holy Spirit. Amen, Blessings.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 3:55 AM
Thank you so much Ronald for the light in your words! A pleasure to read uplifting feedbacks. My deepest regards. Blessed be.
One Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Beautiful imagery, the rainbow has so many wonders....
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:56 AM
A pleasure to read your lovely feedback Silent One.. thank you so much for your gracious presence. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
Callus Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 4:21 PM
The wonders of nature reach out to your heart, Besma! May nature's beauty keep inspiring you! Warm regards // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 4:44 AM
Beauty touches receptive hearts and beautiful souls.. the wealth of your poetry reaches out to your fellow poets and readers and inspire their ink with beauty.. thank you so much Paul for your generous feedback and gracious presence. Best regards. Be blessed always.
Williams Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Captured beautifully as always in a rainbow of imagery. Dear Besma you have such a way with words, a haiku of true beauty, I love and fave it my friend....Maria hugs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 3:24 PM
You are a beautiful soul who do feel words and the inner beauty of Nature.. your generous words are shining with kindness dear Maria. Thank you so much for being here spreading positive vibes and praise. Love and hugs dear friend. Be blessed always.
Kiser Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 8:13 AM
"light rays and raindrops in sight"; they are just as beautiful together as the rainbows. A beautiful Haiku, well done.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so much M.L Kiser for your unique and beautiful feedback! Always an honour and a pleasure to have you on my page. Best regards. Be blessed always.
Ashley Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Nature, in all her glory, creates such beauty that fills us with awe. Dearest Besma, you pay homage to Nature for bestowing her gift of a water-colored luster to the atmosphere for the wonderment of our hearts, minds and to the gladness of our spirit. Your lovely poem conveys her generous and giving ways and her majestic artistic insight - to paint rainbows across the skies! What joy! Your avid and ardent reader derives great pleasure from absorbing the beauty of your poem. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you, my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Nature, a gift from God! an infinite source of inspiration! A wealth of sensations and knowledge to learn from.. my humble write is just a drop from an ocean.. my utmost pleasure and delight to reach the heart and soul of an ardent reader and satiate their thirst for beauty..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 7:21 AM
My dearest Susan, I'm honoured and blessed and so much grateful to you for letting me know, each time you set your very beauty and love on my page, that you are pleased with my humble write.. my deepest regards, love and hugs. Stay in the light of beauty and generosity.
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Your haiku evokes beautiful imagery..you captured the wonder of nature in your rainbow words..well done, Besma.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:37 AM
Your uplifting feedback elated and elevated the soul of a poet and enhances the flow of ink to capture a beauty that meets the level of beauty of a highly talented fellow poet dear Vijay! Thank you so much for your generous words. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
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October 6, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Glorious Haiku dearest, Besma: The reflection of nature in all its grandeur!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:23 AM
A poet of grandeur and remarkable humility dear Demetrios, you do glorify my humble work by your gracious presence and great feedbacks. Encouraging and supportive! Thank you so much, deeply appreciated. My warmest regards. Stay blessed always.
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 11:46 PM
A beautiful image Besma. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:17 AM
Thank you so much Tom for being here encouraging and praising my humble write! Always a great pleasure and honour.. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Hello Besma, yes you have described nature's heart. I love the rainbow, it is so beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:16 AM
Grateful to you dear Darlene for your nice visit and lovely feedback! Nature grips the heart! Have a great day! Be blessed always.
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