Nature Haiku Iii

A wasp struggles
Flapping its wings;
Anthills are nearby.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Stebbings Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:15 AM
Very visual Haiku, Teddy. Well done. Barry
Kimathi Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much, Barry!! ;-)
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September 20, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Teddy, i already see the ants carrying the struggling wasp.... enjoyed. LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:06 AM
Thanks Linda, for passing by to read and enjoy my piece!! *^_^*
Kannan Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 3:25 AM
A great haiku...Poor Wasp...
Kimathi Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Thank you for enjoying my piece, Supraja!! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 5:04 PM
vivid descriptive imagery Teddy! :-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 2:40 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my work, Jan!! *^_^*
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