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Nature Haiku

a warm summer day
flowers sway in gentle breeze ~
honey bees buzzing












Written 15th March 2019-03-15

For writing challenge 2-haiku poetry contest

Sponsored by Dear Heart
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Romios Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Tom missed this one. It's lovely, as is your soul. Panagiota 1/13/2020
Cunningham Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Panagiota, I'm happy you liked it, I just wish they'd stop using pesticides because the bees are dying out. Tom
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 9:52 AM
So reminds me of my youth and summer vacation from school. As we spent all of our days outside in the summer sun ,either dig farm chores, going fishing, swimming/ exploring. Great poetry my dear friend! A fav..
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Robert, it was always the done thing spending holidays outside, today kids spend far to much time indoors. Tom.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Congrats on being #11 in the top 100 new poems!
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Thank you Richard, I must admit it was an unexpected surprise to see it. Tom.
Cholt Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Beautifully captured. Exactly as it would be on a summer's day.
Cunningham Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 1:45 AM
Thank you very much W.A. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 1:08 PM
a well deserved win, tom... big congrats!...huggs
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Thank you very much Nette. Tom.
La France Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku and I love the image too ~
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Thank you very much Dear Heart, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you also for hosting. Tom.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 11:09 PM
I am not surprised to see this in first place Tom. I really liked it! Congratulations! I hope you had a great St. Patrick's Day! xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:18 AM
Thank you very much Connie, went to my daughters for a St Patrick's party, had a great day. Tom.
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much Jan, it was freezing here yesterday, where's spring gone. Tom.
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Great Haiku, Tom. Congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:09 AM
Thank you Eve, went to a St Patrick's party at my daughters, had a great day. Tom.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Back with my congrats, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:08 AM
Thank you very much Andrea. Tom.
Kitchin Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Awesome summer haiku, congratulations on your win!
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Thank you Tania. Tom
Doll Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tom. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Thank you very much Warren. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:00 PM
- Congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 3:52 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Tom.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:43 AM
A lovely scene with nature's beauty Tom! xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 2:52 AM
Thank you Connie, love those lazy summer days. Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:33 PM
The bees seem to thrive here all year long, but your image of this summer day is a delight, Tom! I'm sure Dear Heart will love it too. Best wishes in her contest, Carolyn
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Carolyn, have only seen a couple so far but it is slowly starting to warm up now. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:19 AM
I love your picture of this simple act of nature, Tom. Nicely penned! :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Laura, happy you liked it. Tom
Doll Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 7:45 AM
A great summer haiku with wonderful imagery. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Thank you very much Warren, happy you liked it. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:57 AM
Wondrous Haiku! A Fav! my friend, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Thank you Demetrios, I'm happy you liked it. Tom.
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:44 PM
OMG, I have written one about a bee on a yellow flower, so I am telling you this now because I am waiting to post it up a bit later!! "our great minds...."
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:29 AM
Wow, That we had the same thought of a warm summer day in the garden with flowers and bees.I'm buzzing lol. I'll check yours out. Tom.
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 5:42 PM
absolutely gorgeous imagery Tom, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:20 AM
Thank you Jan, might.be wishful thinking, hopefully we'll get a nice hot summer. Tom.
Onclaud Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 3:52 PM
seems that spring has arrived...you are all aglow, tom... delightful!...huggs
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:19 AM
Thank you very much Nette, glad you liked it. Tom.
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 1:36 PM
Hi Tom, You created a lovely scene with words. But I watch bees from a far. Never up close! I still run lol! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM
I can't tell them apart lol!
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Thanks Alexis, bees have never bothered me. It's their cousins the wasps who are the bad guys. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:44 AM
OMG - it's wonderful to feel hopeful about summer - we had an crazy generous snow dump this Wednesday.
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Yikes, I thought spring was here, there now saying a tail.end of a storm might bring snow, better get my woolies out again lol.
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Good one, it will do well. BG
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Barbara, that scene came into my head whilst thinking what to write. Tom.
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Very nice Tom :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Thank you Heidi. Tom.
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