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Nature Blushes

Dark ominous clouds gather in the sky, Thunder rumbles loud somewhere far away, The earth gets ready, a shower is nigh, That drizzle drives her crazy with her spray, As water and wind in the wet woods play, Trees sway and dance when the gust gathers speed, A burning is quenched as rain meets land's greed, There's steady downpour while lightning flashes, A yearning fulfilled as petrichor's freed, Nature blushes under dripping lashes. 4th November 2022 For Sotto poet's "Dizain poetry contest"

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Date: 11/7/2022 2:08:00 PM
I love your last line especially! Lovely poem.
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations, Jo, well deserved!
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congrats on this excellent Dizain, dear Jo
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:26:00 AM
"ominous clouds", "rain meets land's greed", "Nature blushes under dripping lashes" - beautiful, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2022 2:45:00 AM
Beautiful Dizain form Poetry Jo, lovely lines and that last line is divine. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Date: 11/5/2022 2:31:00 PM
Creative winning work in Sotto's contest. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 11/5/2022 12:20:00 PM
Powerful nature imagery and description of clouds, thunder, and downpour. Congratulations on your first place win, dear friend ~ John
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Jo. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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