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Nature Beckons

Snow lays scattered on mountain edges Fog's thin skin rises from woodland heat Away from the city where peace alleges My troubled mind and I have come to meet Sun's splayed light filters through limbs that dance As songbirds sing out while in graceful flight I search through the trees, their farthest expanse Realize the city has drained my sight Alone where waterfalls pour long thin streams The woods beckon with tranquility To free my spirit, to allow for dreams My soul lays down in its serenity 1/9/19 contest Into the Woods

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic, on a great descriptive and well written poem . :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:08:00 AM
Hi Frederic, You picked a lovely selection to accompany your well writte piece. Well done. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:38:00 AM
You poem created vivid imagery, I am surprised your did not do a sonnet... Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful Frederic! That is how I like it and it also looks like where I live. Very nice to read today :)
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Date: 1/9/2019 10:01:00 PM
Very nice poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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