Nature and Me

In a beautiful springtime cocklight
I woke up into a sweet daydream
Damsel of God dancing in delight
Staging her grace, an elegant theme.

I was called to hug her in love
And showered with her aspergillum
Then a soft breeze to give a shove
Urging me to dance with the rhythm.

In a gasconade greenish dress
Painted in flowers and flying birds
Her ups and downs are in depress
She a beauty, waiting to embrace.

Out of the blue, woke from my dream
I saw my sweetheart sprawling naked
Her dress was torn and stolen in a gleam
By a group of lusty crooked.

They cut her ornaments – trees and meadows
Her flowers vanished and so the birds
She laid as a desert weeping endless
Her tears dried up and so the lakes

Fallen on knees I cried with her
Nature and me, ready to revive
A piece of cloth gone from the attire
To be returned, for us to survive. 



Submitted on December 16, 2019, for STRAND SPECIAL 3 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest  sponsored by Brian Strand
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Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Wow! Gorgeous, eloquent image-laden poetry, Jenish. Wonderful piece. Classical art-poetry. I read it and see the story unfold as a painting on canvas. Kudos! :) gw
Somadas Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 9:48 AM
I'm honoured by your comment..Thanks..
Mcconnell Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Such a wonderful piece Jenish, showing great imagery and super rhyme. Excellent indeed!
Somadas Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Thank you Gordon..
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Awesome tribute to nature Jenish--all the best.
Somadas Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Na Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 12:04 AM
very nice Jen lots of imagery. Thanks for sharing
Somadas Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Gregory..
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