John Freeman Poet Haiku

Nature

Nature

~wooden soldiers in formation
      creator has his ducks in a row

~orderly fashion, creation’s design 
     creation by love  decrees
        life of spirit, in trees

~branches, water, leaves
     the beauty photogenic… 
       photosynthesis   

~humanity’s gift 
     leaves give up their offering
       watered of branches

~ Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ ~
For Nature Four in One Contest 

By John Moses Freeman

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Sharon Winter April 21, 2011 at 5:02 PM Splendid series of nature haiku! Well done and quite inspiring. Thank you my friend for your kind congrats. So appreciated. Love, shar

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 12, 2011 at 3:17 PM Nicely realized, Joihn, and the cresendo builds very subtly and shrewly. I like this. Thanks as always, Gerard

Wandering Butterfly March 9, 2011 at 11:39 AM beautiful write. I especially like the stanza that begins " Branches, water, leaves"...great job John...-Miranda-

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2011 at 11:29 PM Nicely done, john. Wooden soldiers a great image of them. I called them "sentries" in one of my poems a long time ago! Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2011 at 4:03 PM Reads like a winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Enjoyed....Good luck in the contest...Sara

George Aul March 8, 2011 at 12:17 PM Congrats on your win in the Nature contest ...... George

James Fraser March 8, 2011 at 12:14 PM Nice one John, oozing images of nature. It's sure is deserved of it's placing in Constance's contest, well done....:)smiles

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 8, 2011 at 12:46 AM Congrats on your win in Constance's contest John :)

Kash Poet March 7, 2011 at 6:14 PM Wonderful write john!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta March 7, 2011 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Constance, john

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 1:20 PM Wow John, this is really beautiful. Congratulations to you on your win in the contest :) blessings Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2011 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest John. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2011 at 7:15 AM wow, I am glad I c ame to see this one. I see it placed and am happy to know that. I sure hope I can get over to that winner list and see all the other winners. Congratulations, john

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:30 AM This was truly an awesome write dear Moses. Warm congrats

Harry Horsman March 6, 2011 at 10:51 PM love the difference here John, excellent poetry. congrats. Harry

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 9:23 PM what a special offering, john... hats off to you for winning big in the contest,,:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 7:55 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, John! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire March 6, 2011 at 7:45 PM Don't know how I missed this earlier, John. It's beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 7:29 PM Congrats Moses on your exciting win in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

Constance La France March 6, 2011 at 7:30 AM Thank you for supporting my contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2011 at 5:46 AM Moses this is a beautiful write and entry for the new contest.. expressions to impress the reader and Constance will surely luv .. humanity's gift.. indeed from a loving Creator my friend..happy weekend with luv..

Joe Maverick March 3, 2011 at 2:27 PM good write here john, best wishes in Carols contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown March 3, 2011 at 10:17 AM I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read John. The best to you in Constance's contest. I am still working at coming up with a Limerick for your contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 3, 2011 at 7:21 AM Well john this poem is punctuated with brilliance!!Must be a winner---kashinath

Nette Onclaud March 3, 2011 at 7:20 AM an imaginative , stimulating gift, john... nature abounds! best winning luck to you.. :) huggs, nette

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