Nature

Nature ~wooden soldiers in formation creator has his ducks in a row ~orderly fashion, creation’s design creation by love decrees life of spirit, in trees ~branches, water, leaves the beauty photogenic… photosynthesis ~humanity’s gift leaves give up their offering watered of branches ~ Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ ~ For Nature Four in One Contest By John Moses Freeman

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Sharon Winter

Date: 4/21/2011 5:02:00 PM

Splendid series of nature haiku! Well done and quite inspiring. Thank you my friend for your kind congrats. So appreciated. Love, shar

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/12/2011 3:17:00 PM

Nicely realized, Joihn, and the cresendo builds very subtly and shrewly. I like this. Thanks as always, Gerard

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/9/2011 11:39:00 AM

beautiful write. I especially like the stanza that begins " Branches, water, leaves"...great job John...-Miranda-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:29:00 PM

Nicely done, john. Wooden soldiers a great image of them. I called them "sentries" in one of my poems a long time ago! Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2011 4:03:00 PM

Reads like a winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Enjoyed....Good luck in the contest...Sara

George Aul

Date: 3/8/2011 12:17:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the Nature contest ...... George

James Fraser

Date: 3/8/2011 12:14:00 PM

Nice one John, oozing images of nature. It's sure is deserved of it's placing in Constance's contest, well done....:)smiles

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/8/2011 12:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Constance's contest John :)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2011 6:14:00 PM

Wonderful write john!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Constance, john

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 1:20:00 PM

Wow John, this is really beautiful. Congratulations to you on your win in the contest :) blessings Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest John. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 7:15:00 AM

wow, I am glad I c ame to see this one. I see it placed and am happy to know that. I sure hope I can get over to that winner list and see all the other winners. Congratulations, john

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:30:00 AM

This was truly an awesome write dear Moses. Warm congrats

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 10:51:00 PM

love the difference here John, excellent poetry. congrats. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 9:23:00 PM

what a special offering, john... hats off to you for winning big in the contest,,:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, John! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 7:45:00 PM

Don't know how I missed this earlier, John. It's beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 7:29:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your exciting win in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2011 7:30:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:46:00 AM

Moses this is a beautiful write and entry for the new contest.. expressions to impress the reader and Constance will surely luv .. humanity's gift.. indeed from a loving Creator my friend..happy weekend with luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/3/2011 2:27:00 PM

good write here john, best wishes in Carols contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 10:17:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read John. The best to you in Constance's contest. I am still working at coming up with a Limerick for your contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/3/2011 7:21:00 AM

Well john this poem is punctuated with brilliance!!Must be a winner---kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/3/2011 7:20:00 AM

an imaginative , stimulating gift, john... nature abounds! best winning luck to you.. :) huggs, nette