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Nature

Nature

~wooden soldiers in formation
      creator has his ducks in a row

~orderly fashion, creation’s design 
     creation by love  decrees
        life of spirit, in trees

~branches, water, leaves
     the beauty photogenic… 
       photosynthesis   

~humanity’s gift 
     leaves give up their offering
       watered of branches

~ Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ ~
For Nature Four in One Contest 

By John Moses Freeman

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Sharon Winter Date: 4/21/2011 5:02:00 PM Splendid series of nature haiku! Well done and quite inspiring. Thank you my friend for your kind congrats. So appreciated. Love, shar Login to Reply

Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 3/12/2011 3:17:00 PM Nicely realized, Joihn, and the cresendo builds very subtly and shrewly. I like this. Thanks as always, Gerard Login to Reply

Wandering Butterfly Date: 3/9/2011 11:39:00 AM beautiful write. I especially like the stanza that begins " Branches, water, leaves"...great job John...-Miranda- Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/8/2011 11:29:00 PM Nicely done, john. Wooden soldiers a great image of them. I called them "sentries" in one of my poems a long time ago! Congratulations. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/8/2011 4:03:00 PM Reads like a winner..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Enjoyed....Good luck in the contest...Sara Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 3/8/2011 12:17:00 PM Congrats on your win in the Nature contest ...... George Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/8/2011 12:14:00 PM Nice one John, oozing images of nature. It's sure is deserved of it's placing in Constance's contest, well done....:)smiles Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/8/2011 12:46:00 AM Congrats on your win in Constance's contest John :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/7/2011 6:14:00 PM Wonderful write john!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages---kashinath Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/7/2011 1:37:00 PM Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Constance, john Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/7/2011 1:20:00 PM Wow John, this is really beautiful. Congratulations to you on your win in the contest :) blessings Wilma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/7/2011 11:56:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest John. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2011 7:15:00 AM wow, I am glad I c ame to see this one. I see it placed and am happy to know that. I sure hope I can get over to that winner list and see all the other winners. Congratulations, john Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/7/2011 12:30:00 AM This was truly an awesome write dear Moses. Warm congrats Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/6/2011 10:51:00 PM love the difference here John, excellent poetry. congrats. Harry Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/6/2011 9:23:00 PM what a special offering, john... hats off to you for winning big in the contest,,:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/6/2011 7:55:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, John! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/6/2011 7:45:00 PM Don't know how I missed this earlier, John. It's beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/6/2011 7:29:00 PM Congrats Moses on your exciting win in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/6/2011 7:30:00 AM Thank you for supporting my contest. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/4/2011 5:46:00 AM Moses this is a beautiful write and entry for the new contest.. expressions to impress the reader and Constance will surely luv .. humanity's gift.. indeed from a loving Creator my friend..happy weekend with luv.. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 3/3/2011 2:27:00 PM good write here john, best wishes in Carols contest. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/3/2011 10:17:00 AM I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read John. The best to you in Constance's contest. I am still working at coming up with a Limerick for your contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/3/2011 7:21:00 AM Well john this poem is punctuated with brilliance!!Must be a winner---kashinath Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/3/2011 7:20:00 AM an imaginative , stimulating gift, john... nature abounds! best winning luck to you.. :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

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