Form J - Jueju (untraditional) Poetry Contest
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bright side of nature draws out creative moves, like stellar views and vivid colors conveys warmth, calmness gives refreshing scents fresh air and proffers freedom, joy, peace, light dark side of nature brings on natural events with extreme strength, so disastrous causes havoc, death, sudden losses, grief nature, like life can be nice, bright, hard, dark
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