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A vivid rainbow arcs across the sky, Pitter patter raindrops fall ... sunshine, my crock of gold Form K Kimo Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/27/22

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2022 8:50:00 AM

Love the last line Jan

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2022 10:49:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your wonderful poem and I love the image too ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:20:00 PM

Fantastic writing on topic of nature, Jan. Congrats to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/30/2022 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Now, where is that pot of gold??? Have a blessed day writing away........

Joseph May

Date: 3/29/2022 7:46:00 AM

This is lovely Jan, Congrats on your win

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/29/2022 4:01:00 AM

I love that sunshine is your crock of gold Jan! The simple things are the best, Happy Tuesday xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/28/2022 7:13:00 PM

"crock of gold" - Great comparison and metaphor. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/28/2022 2:53:00 PM

What a wonderful thought Jan! We can find gold in the bright sunshine! Love the way you paint so vividly with words! Absolutely delightful! Congratulations on your win. Sending sunshine along with hugs!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/28/2022 11:15:00 AM

Mine, too! Enjoyed! Happy Mother's Day! Aloha!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 1:20:00 PM

thanks Rico xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/28/2022 5:00:00 AM

Ah, nice my crock of gold too dear lady, hope your keeping well, sending love and prayers your way today :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 9:58:00 AM

thanks Vie I am fine, hubby and son just had covid but are well and out of isolation and life is back to near normal as possible xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/28/2022 2:39:00 AM

Beautiful to see after a rainstorm Jan, Good luck in the contest. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 9:57:00 AM

yes I love it when its still drizzling and yet you see a rainbow and sun:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/28/2022 1:24:00 AM

This is a magnificent poem. Best for a win. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 9:56:00 AM

aww thanks for the sweet comment:-) xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/27/2022 3:32:00 PM

Excellent Jan, I think you are onto a winner here, wonderful upbeat colourful poem, and all natural too, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 9:56:00 AM

thanks David I managed to get the last spot to close the contest I hope Constance likes my effort:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 3/27/2022 2:45:00 PM

Oh my what a crock!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2022 9:56:00 AM

for once its not one of poop I hope lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/27/2022 2:39:00 PM

this is pure gold, jan! (and not from your crock!) best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2022 2:41:00 PM

aww thanks Ilene, I had it saved on another pc and forgot to send it to myself in an e mail so have hurriedly tried to remember the gist of the poem to grab the last space in the contest! It's Mother's Day here have had a lovely day:-) hugs jan xx