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Nature

A vivid rainbow arcs across the sky, Pitter patter raindrops fall ... sunshine, my crock of gold Form K Kimo Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/27/22
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Love the last line Jan
La France Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your wonderful poem and I love the image too ~Constance
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Fantastic writing on topic of nature, Jan. Congrats to you
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Now, where is that pot of gold??? Have a blessed day writing away........
May Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 7:46 AM
This is lovely Jan, Congrats on your win
Gentile Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:01 AM
I love that sunshine is your crock of gold Jan! The simple things are the best, Happy Tuesday xxoo
Alex Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:13 PM
"crock of gold" - Great comparison and metaphor. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 2:53 PM
What a wonderful thought Jan! We can find gold in the bright sunshine! Love the way you paint so vividly with words! Absolutely delightful! Congratulations on your win. Sending sunshine along with hugs!
Leffanta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Mine, too! Enjoyed! Happy Mother's Day! Aloha!
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:20 PM
thanks Rico xx
Rose  Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 5:00 AM
Ah, nice my crock of gold too dear lady, hope your keeping well, sending love and prayers your way today :)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:58 AM
thanks Vie I am fine, hubby and son just had covid but are well and out of isolation and life is back to near normal as possible xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 2:39 AM
Beautiful to see after a rainstorm Jan, Good luck in the contest. Tom
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:57 AM
yes I love it when its still drizzling and yet you see a rainbow and sun:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:24 AM
This is a magnificent poem. Best for a win. Hugs
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:56 AM
aww thanks for the sweet comment:-) xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Excellent Jan, I think you are onto a winner here, wonderful upbeat colourful poem, and all natural too, cheers David
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:56 AM
thanks David I managed to get the last spot to close the contest I hope Constance likes my effort:-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Oh my what a crock!!!!
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:56 AM
for once its not one of poop I hope lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 2:39 PM
this is pure gold, jan! (and not from your crock!) best of luck in the contest...
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 2:41 PM
aww thanks Ilene, I had it saved on another pc and forgot to send it to myself in an e mail so have hurriedly tried to remember the gist of the poem to grab the last space in the contest! It's Mother's Day here have had a lovely day:-) hugs jan xx
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