Nature

My feelings for you are like a beautiful boquet of roses. 

No matter what they stay strong.

They're a sign of passion.

As my love is for you, passionate and strong.

And will always stay true.

I need you like roses need water.

Without you I'll sleep forever.

Blinded from life, lifless as can be.

Without you there's no me.

I need you like I need a tree, without trees we can not breath.

Without you I can not see. 

Your kiling my heart, and flooding my world with my tears.

World War III is not meant to be, like you without me. 

I just wish you could see.

My heart is a rain forest of love.

And your a cloud of harmful dust, infecting the earth.

Making me weak.

Killing my lungs as quick as can be.

You are my air, the way I breath.

The cloud of dust is drowning me. 

the way Florida is said to be.

Underwater and swept away. Taken over bye a dangerouse thing. 

In this case its love, drowning me. 

Taking me under, holding me in.

Come resque me.

Come be my super man and save me from the damages you've caused.

Put my heart back together, and fill my lungs. 

Save the world.

Be my superman, and I'll be your girl.

I'll love you for ever, just save my world from dustruction.

And harm, show me you can be a lucky charm. 

Take me over the rainbow, into your wonder land.

Stay with me forever just be my man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/5/2008 2:03:00 PM
I like the use of figurative language in this poem. The flow is soft and consistent. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Great job! ~Joseph
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