Nature ( Revised)

Icy winds howl loudly,
on natures breeze,
as forgotten leaves rattle,
on nearly naked trees.

Birds sail high,
trying to find,
a worm, and insect,
of any kind.

Light fades slowly,
as darkness surronds,
all the incredible treasures,
on God's precious ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/17/2015 4:14:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:09:00 PM
There is something so serene about this, ...far aware from the traffic jams, smoke stacks and coffee pots. Thanks for the lovely walk in the woods and for your kind comment.
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:32:00 PM
It's great to see you posting again, Christy. This is quite a remarkable perspective on winter. You capture the sighs and sounds very well and I love the last two lines that bring it home so nicely. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2009 5:02:00 PM
I really like this revision. The inspirational last stanza gives this poem purpose. Nice use of imagery. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 12/11/2009 1:04:00 PM
Beautifully done Christy !! Hope you have a great holiday and that 2010 is the best year yet for you and yours!!
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Date: 12/11/2009 1:03:00 PM
a beautifull poem here and I really enjoyed it alot, especially the end, it really ended the poem great. Have a nice day. :):)
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