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Nature is as careless as it is bountiful
The faster the death, the faster is evolution.
A female eats her own fertile eggs,
When she is hungry while laying the eggs.

Gall gnat produce eggs within its body,
When the eggs are hatched within the body
They devour their own parents.
The parents die, the next generation lives.

The sea is a cup of death
And land is a stained alter stone,
We are the fortunate survivors
Living on flotsam and jetsam.

Right or wrong is a human concept.
The nature cares not if we live or die.

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Tenth placement in
I have chosen the poem "Nature" of Constance, The Rambling poet
Contest: Scavenger Hunt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/24/2010 5:23:00 AM
And will be here long after we are gone.I am very conscious of nature and do so respect it in many ways that others don't.I truly enjoyed your write today. Gary. ps Thanks again for taking time to comment on my posts.
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:39:00 AM
Well done Ram.especially liked the last quatrain.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:45:00 AM
(The sea is a cup of death) OMG!!!beautiful -brilliant thoughts!!!congra on winning the contest.. I love the poem but i love that line the most..it shaked me off!!
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:59:00 AM
This is a very thought-provoking poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 9:01:00 AM
My congratulations Dr.Ram to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations dr Ram on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Scavenger Hunt contest with this wonderful write and win to enjoy this happy Sunday.. appreciate u reading my blog and left u a comment there as well.. enjoy ..in Italy..yeah..luv..
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:32:00 PM
well, you did awesome with this, Dr. Ram. It is much to your taste, this topic of her poem you chose! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:59:00 PM
love it! good poem, good message, a winner! jimbo
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Date: 8/12/2010 11:09:00 AM
interesting, the faster the death the faster evolution-brilliant
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful and interesting write. Best wishes my friend. ......Ravindra....Dr. R Mehta.
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:43:00 AM
This is an exceptional piece of writing Dr. Ram... making it my new favorite today.. what power it has in its conveying message.. all this from Constance's inspiration.. good luck in her contest....with luv..
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:24:00 AM
The last two comments below are for C.L. Thorton
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:12:00 AM
If the noun is only of its kind, it is definite noun and it takes article THE.
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:09:00 AM
Nature is a definite noun. I think you know we have two types of nouns- definite and indefinite. In the last line, I have used as a definite noun- the nature as I see it and so there is no question to remove it.
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:17:00 AM
great thoughts...so true. We have to make our own survival with Gods help.
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:34:00 AM
it is amazing,how the destructive forces of nature,are also it's regenerative forces,which all becomes inclusive to all...so many things we're still learing about the forces of nature,terrestrial and universal...peace , jay
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