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Naturally

Like music is the wife of poetry The deep is the wife of the sea Height is the wife of the mountain Shade is the wife of the tree Life is the wife of nature Death the wife of peace Need the wife of creation Sleep the wife of dreams Imagination the wife of what seems Picture this what I mean Will you be this wife for me

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Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/22/2013 8:27:00 AM

Lovely! This one is really romantic one :), the fantastic ending made a perfect closure, enjoyed my reading tonight :)

Elizabeth West

Date: 2/14/2013 3:04:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem.

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 2/13/2013 7:05:00 PM

this is wonderful... a comparison so sweet.. full of wisdom and flow.. enjoyed every bit of it.. thanx for sharing ! love maryam

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2013 7:05:00 PM

Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Love makes one want to be the others everything ;) Light & love

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/11/2013 11:20:00 PM

Lovely! I really enjoyed every line! Great write!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/11/2013 5:47:00 PM

I agree with everything everyone has said. I love this poem! Excellent job! Always, Laura

The Situation

Date: 2/11/2013 4:06:00 PM

My masterpiece.

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/11/2013 3:18:00 PM

So very original and interesting.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/11/2013 2:38:00 PM

Wonderfully written! Hope you find your wife! Thank you for visiting

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/11/2013 1:07:00 PM

What a cool perspective, perfection is the wife of creativity when it comes to this Poem. Well done!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/11/2013 10:40:00 AM

Interesting piece you have written. A wife for all seasons. Nicely done . love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:04:00 PM

this is lovely!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/10/2013 4:57:00 PM

What an imaginative way to bring things together that can never be separate. I wish it could have gone on longer as you probably could have added so many other things. Loved the end where a man needs a wife too. PS - I'm sort of dried up, it all left without even a goodbye.

The Situation
Date: 2/11/2013 6:53:00 AM

I added four more lines. They lasted three hours. But I'm trying to keep my work short so people will read it and not skip it.

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 2/10/2013 4:43:00 AM

Ying and yang, complimetry harmony. Nice poem situation - shaz

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2013 4:23:00 PM

Ahh!!!..So descriptive of how a wife can be such a perfect match..If for the contest, reads like winning material to me.Enjoyed.We have had a very mild winter but one never knows for sure if it is going to be over or if mother nature is going to throw in some surprises.1993 we had a blizzard close to mid-march it was around the 13 of March.We had 65 mile an hour wind with snow..It was really rough..One year we had two foot of snow in February.So until April comes around it could still be bd..Sk

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2013 4:23:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 2/9/2013 4:14:00 PM

This is very beautiful