Natural Paralysis

Lemon and reef sharks Upside down, enter tonic Immobility http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-4.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 24, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Vivid and engaging haiku James... u have many creative qualities with your poetry .. kinda like myself... thankxxx for comments on Happy Halloween... I can tell u are a kid a heart who grew into a fine gentleman... life experience contributes to our talents and gifts... diversification... thats the key. Linda-Marie
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October 16, 2009 at 10:22 AM
Striking imagery in this perfectly penned Haiku, James! Love, Robin
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October 15, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Vivid images for a powerful poem. Much conveyed in just three lines. Well done! Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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October 15, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Hi James, I've seen the reef sharks and they do sometimes seem to be suspended in a "Natural Paralysis" state. Nice work! Love you, Carolyn
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October 14, 2009 at 7:48 AM
It gives me great pleasure to be able to read your poetry James. I thank you for sharing your writing with us today. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:41 PM
James I reckon thats probably so - At least I would take that bait - God Bless you James, mj
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October 13, 2009 at 7:48 PM
Cool Haiku James, scary situation. Sincerely, Moses
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October 13, 2009 at 2:24 PM
This is interesting. I have read that some sharks hoover on the bottom and sleep where they once were thought never to sleep. Keep writing. Sara
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