Natural Genetic Balancing

humid, early morning
rain-soaked shrubs

inhale...

FLASH!   
              olfactory
                       recognition:

             .....pine forest morning
                                   after the rain

                        my senses clear
                                   confidence positioned
                             
                                                higher plain of existence.............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gorelick Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 8:30 PM
wonderful poem James..some great phrases..BG
Moore Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 12:21 PM
I liked it, nice imagry and a good visual format
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Love the expression in this one. Sara
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