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Natural Breath

Whispers in my ear, tussling of my hair, and sweeping me off my feet. Wrapping a blanket around me, warmth engulfs my form, new breath, blown gently upon my skin. Goose pimples, shivers down my spine; bodily senses pricked top to toe.... as you encircle me, I move to find comfort. Willing you to climax, that I might find satisfaction, a quieter state of mind, a stillness, as the sun shines once more. I anticipate your return... Author's notes Okay, so this is slightly different from me....I wanted to kind of personify the wind here; making the reader unsure as to whether it were a lover I was thinking of.... Try re-reading thinking of it the other way, I think it works.....

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