Natural Breath
Whispers in my ear,
tussling of my hair,
and sweeping me
off my feet.
Wrapping a blanket
around me,
warmth engulfs my form,
new breath,
blown gently upon my skin.
Goose pimples,
shivers down my spine;
bodily senses pricked
top to toe....
as you encircle me,
I move to find comfort.
Willing you to climax,
that I might find satisfaction,
a quieter state of mind,
a stillness,
as the sun shines once more.
I anticipate your return...
Author's notes
Okay, so this is slightly different from me....I wanted to kind of personify the wind here;
making the reader unsure as to whether it were a lover I was thinking of.... Try re-reading
thinking of it the other way, I think it works.....
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