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Natural Blanket

*Locks of white spumes droops
  on rug of emerald moss--
  Blanket of cold rocks

*Lock-- tress of hair

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2009 2:13:00 PM

very unque take! Light & Love

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:29:00 PM

I like how everybody got a different interpretation out of this picture. Congratulations on your placement!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 7:58:00 PM

Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your placing in Raul's Contest well deserved Honor YOUR POETIC Talent is inspiring ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:37:00 AM

Congratulations, Ismael, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this absolutely stunning haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/21/2009 8:52:00 AM

Oh, I Love The Vivid Contrast of Imagery in this Haiku ! ... (I Love Snow) And the Description of Nature as A Woman with cold and uncombed hair is so unique... Excellent MoonBee

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 10:16:00 AM

I really liked the imagery you put in this haiku--very jampacked indeed! Enjoy reading your writes! & I look forward to reading more :)

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...I love all these Haikus and am glad I didn't have to judge. Marty

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/18/2009 11:43:00 PM

congratulations on winning in Raul's contest..well deserved win-Charma

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 9:13:00 PM

A very lovely read indeed my friend. Congrats on you win in Raul's Contest. I thank you for your welcomed commets onmy work as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell