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Natural Blanket

*Locks of white spumes droops
  on rug of emerald moss--
  Blanket of cold rocks

*Lock-- tress of hair

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Debbie Guzzi

November 21, 2009 at 2:13 PM

very unque take! Light & Love

Brandee Augustus

October 27, 2009 at 1:29 PM

I like how everybody got a different interpretation out of this picture. Congratulations on your placement!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 24, 2009 at 7:58 PM

Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your placing in Raul's Contest well deserved Honor YOUR POETIC Talent is inspiring ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 4:37 AM

Congratulations, Ismael, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this absolutely stunning haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Moonbee Canady

October 21, 2009 at 8:52 AM

Oh, I Love The Vivid Contrast of Imagery in this Haiku ! ... (I Love Snow) And the Description of Nature as A Woman with cold and uncombed hair is so unique... Excellent MoonBee

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 19, 2009 at 10:16 AM

I really liked the imagery you put in this haiku--very jampacked indeed! Enjoy reading your writes! & I look forward to reading more :)

Marty Owens

October 19, 2009 at 9:38 AM

Congratulations on your win...I love all these Haikus and am glad I didn't have to judge. Marty

Charmaine Chircop

October 18, 2009 at 11:43 PM

congratulations on winning in Raul's contest..well deserved win-Charma

Adell Foster

October 18, 2009 at 9:13 PM

A very lovely read indeed my friend. Congrats on you win in Raul's Contest. I thank you for your welcomed commets onmy work as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell