Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Natural Art

Native artists gave the spirit world voice
Gods of nature speak though their art
Wings steadily raised in supplication
The spirit world and man not far apart



Written in 2011 for the Totem contest sponsored by Francine Roberts.
Original title "Let The Rain Come"

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Connie Marcum Wong April 26, 2019 at 9:30 PM There is great imagery in your entry Barbara. Spoken and unspoken. Lovely! I really hope this does well in the contest. xxoo

Nette Onclaud April 22, 2019 at 1:19 PM art is universal, thus we see ourselves and culture through it... splendidly penned, BG...huggs

Gershon Wolf April 22, 2019 at 1:09 PM So true; so true. Western man tends to view the separation as a yawning chasm---perhaps because he is so out of touch with himself... :) gw

Robert L. Hinshaw April 20, 2019 at 5:52 PM Splendid entry for the contest BeeGee. Great good luck to you and thanks for your gracious comment re my entry for the contest - BoB

Sunlite Wanter April 20, 2019 at 5:35 PM Love the Native American flavor and comparison.

Mystic Rose Rose April 20, 2019 at 5:13 PM I agree. The two worlds are never far apart. It is us who refuse to see. Far and beyond, they watch us. Nice poetry Barbara, xo