Nativity Play

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(True story)

As nativity plays go, this one was a doozy
with plenty of chances to fail
and even after all the countless rehearsals
it did, on a Biblical scale.
My part, I was Joseph, and Barbara was Mary,
the Jesus doll wrapped in a sheet
three wise men in the wings with tea towels on their heads
plus trainers and pumps on their feet.
The donkey was resting, a little bizarre
since the creature was mounted on wheels
and in the light of the candles it's red plastic handle
just made the scene slightly surreal.
The stable was made from the school's Wendy house
for the play they used just two hinged walls
as the wise men came Joseph leaned back on one arm
and the whole structure started to fall.
The look from the prompt at the front of the stage
signified I was in real deep trouble
as the magi and shepherds all valiantly scrambled
to pull Mary from out of the rubble.
The infant child surfaced though held upside down
from the tangle of thatch straw and rafters
as his messenger Gabriel rolled on the floor
in a fit of hysterical laughter.
The following year I found I was demoted
as teacher didn't want to lose sleep
over what new disaster I'd find myself master
so I took the back row as a sheep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/24/2018 5:14:00 PM
That's picture you needed to post! No..I see it clearly. Fantastic imagery. bbn
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Date: 12/18/2015 12:10:00 AM
Relegated to 'the back row as a sheep!' This whole piece is full of fun and frolic... I love your language and the imagery is stupendous! Well done!! Keith
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Viv Wigley
Date: 12/18/2015 12:53:00 AM
Thanks Keith, I remember it vividly, as my first major piece of public embarrassment. And it turned out not to be my last, either.... Regards, Viv
Date: 11/25/2015 3:00:00 AM
Beautiful pen Viv! Very nice write!A 7!:) Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/25/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Dorian, love from me x
Date: 11/24/2015 6:15:00 PM
Hello Viv... you should have got the lead role in 'some mother's do have 'em' - you're a natural - Lindsay
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/24/2015 7:38:00 PM
I thought about it, Lindsay, but realised I look an even bigger plonker in a beret :). Regards, Viv
Date: 11/23/2015 11:44:00 AM
Gotta rate it 7, of course!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/23/2015 11:49:00 PM
Thanks Laura, glad it gave you a smile. Viv x
Date: 11/23/2015 11:43:00 AM
HahaaaaA! I could just picture the whole fandangled scene in my mind, Viv! Is that sheep outfit a bit scratchy? Lol :D
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/23/2015 11:49:00 PM
Nah, due to budget constraints basically you got on all fours with a fleece blanket draped over you. 'Cheap sheep'. Viv x
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