Nativity

Nativity

Twilight in the stable
 Soft rays slant in radiance
Lingering voices and starlight
 Swaddle the eternal light
Serenading the Word
 Who sang them into life

12-29-21
Contest: Bite Size Poem #31
Judge: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcintosh Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 2:53 PM
I love this friend. God bless you this New Year 2022. Love, Gina
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Thank you so much dear friend. Sending you blessings for more wonderful writes from your amazing, faithful heart. Hugs and love!
George Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 1:31 AM
In the twilight of the stable, a little babe, the symbol of eternal light lies swaddled in glory ! A snippet of a nativity scene. Thanks a lot Sam for visiting my page.
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Hi Valsa! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. It is much appreciated. And, if I have not said it, welcome to the soup. Your pennings are quite lovely. Enjoyed reading some of them. Sending blessings of gladness and joy for 2022.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 7:29 PM
Dear Sam, how beautifully you captured the Nativity scene in a bite-size poem! Stunning images! A Blessed Happy New Year to You ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Dearest Mala, can you tell how far behind I am already in the new year? Thank you for your New Year's blessing and wonderful feedback. You are always a bright spot in my day. Sending back to you blessings of joy, gladness and peace for the new year.
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 12:47 PM
You captured the scene well Sam, good luck in the contest and a very happy new year to you. Over Fork Over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Happy New Year Tom! I treasure your words. They always lift me up and motivate me. Sending you blessings of joy, good health and happiness for 2022. Over Fork Over!
Sands Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Oh, I love this. A fave for me ! Beautiful :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Heidi! Your lovely New Year's note and fav truly brought a big :D to my face and heart. Sending you blessings of joy and gladness for 2022!
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