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Native American Love Poem

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Native American Love Poem

I walk to you
softly upon this earth
among things great and small
remembering one great Spirit
created us all...

You walk in beauty
my eyes always seeking
the red and purple sunset
beholding in your eyes
pastel and calico I can't forget...

I dance for you at dawn
upon our bed of evening light
riding on a dark cloud
praying for your female rain
in a house of pollen I chant out loud...

Hey yaw, hey yaw

In my house of evening twilight
in our dreams made of dark clouds
you in your moccasins of dark clouds
dance your way to me
as you chant for me out loud...

Hey yaw, hey yaw...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/31/2015 11:07:00 AM
thumbs up pal excellent pen passing you a warm smile
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Date: 3/26/2015 9:32:00 PM
Original, every line kept me focused on the next! That's how you hook the reader. Very creative, Ken. Larry Berdoo
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:25:00 PM
two kindred souls becoming one...excellent Ken
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