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Native American

Remember ; Mountain :
When Paiute canoes paddled :
Bygone many years

Inspired by Raul's Contest " Morning Ambience "

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Colleen Bono

Date: 3/31/2010 12:31:00 PM

I am part souix indian.Nice haiku.Hope you have a Happy Easter.

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/24/2010 2:46:00 PM

I think I'm part Cherokee and my oldest daughter was conceived on Indian ground. She had an astrologer tell her she was an Indian warrior and Victorian lady in a previous life. Who knows? :-) Ellen

James Fraser

Date: 2/24/2010 11:04:00 AM

HG, i just love poems about Indigenous Indians, and this is no exception > its wonderful > and covers so so much of their past in so few words >> Soup Mail for you >> James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/22/2010 6:23:00 PM

Very nice Haiku in honor of the Paiute Native American. Yes, those years are gone. Thanks for bringing them back in thoughts. Thank you for your very nice, encouraging and uplifting comments on my poem, HG Daniel. You do me much honor with your words. Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/22/2010 3:12:00 PM

One day, perhaps, we may witness the memories of the Mountains ...as a single instant.inspiring Haiku, my friend. -Robert

Angela Alldredge

Date: 2/22/2010 9:06:00 AM

Dear HG, I'm glad you was insired to write this one. You said it all in just a few short words, very truthful when it comes to Native Americans. I would also like to thank you for all your comments on my work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2010 8:00:00 AM

A very nice take on the contest, HG. I wish the Paiutes were still paddling through the mountain streams today. We have lost so much in the name of progress. Lovely haiku! Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 2/19/2010 12:17:00 AM

well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2010 5:35:00 PM

Interesting conception in this one. Should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/17/2010 7:38:00 AM

Absolutely outstanding write my forever friend HG. I wish you the best in the contest as always, Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/16/2010 10:01:00 PM

History left a legacy marked on the abundance of beauty of this nature, an existing witness of the past. Thank you for believing on me, HGarvey, appreciate so much your comment and another challenge to heed. (^_^) Noel.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/16/2010 9:45:00 PM

Good luck in the contest...Marty

Marty Owens

Date: 2/16/2010 9:44:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku...love your idea...Marty P.S. someone on poetry soup will have to delete it. Whoever is in charge of the website. Sorry I can't help you...Marty

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/16/2010 8:51:00 PM

Such beautiful images woven into a miraculous poem. amazing write as always, coming from such a great mind, and a warming heart. -Always & Forever Lynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:55:00 PM

Excellent HG .. a wonderful entry into Raul's contest.. my entry is Atmosphere.. luv these photo contests.. each poet sees something different but his one is by far the best one I have read so far.. BUT .. I do luv my silent beau... so eveything u write is special to me... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 2/16/2010 7:29:00 PM

And now we grieve for a culture almost lost to the modern world--a people in touch with nature instead of destoying it. Much to think about in your words. Good luck in the contest. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/16/2010 6:35:00 PM

there goes the neiborhood!