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For Crystol Woods' the 'National Poetry Month Word Prompts' Poetry Contest

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National Poetry Month

My heart with such dread is reeling.
I’m looking up at the ceiling.

Something’s there though it’s something I can’t see.
I felt it first when it went right through me.

I shivered then because it felt so cold.
The room is frigid. What do I behold?

The ceiling fan is spinning round and round.
It’s not turned on! Is something here earth-bound?

Is there a ghost gazing down at me in my fright?
Is it something wicked that visits me this night?

Or is it an old soul trapped and as scared as I?
Oh, that I could see it and look it in the eye.

Suddenly the spinning of the fan has stopped.
Something from the ceiling to the floor has dropped.

I pick up a brooch that in a picture of my great-grandma I had viewed.
By the brooch her death deemed accidental is with murder’s chill imbued.
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Ebbs Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Good Job! Ed
Godwin Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 6:15 PM
Enjoyed the drama/suspense growing - goosebumps at the end, Andrea. We both posted writes for this contest today. I enjoyed your much. Mail. Love, CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 1:44 PM
for a long, i was hitchcocked!...a gothic treat, andie
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thanks so much, Nette
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Chilling and gripping, Andrea till the end.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thanks.iove your comment.
Manassian Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Spooky!! You got me with this thriller. Good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, Eileen
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:13 AM
- Exciting ... nothing to fear, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Great poem. GL in contest.
Green Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Nice one Andrea. Best of luck in the contest
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