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For Crystol Woods' the 'National Poetry Month Word Prompts' Poetry Contest

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My heart with such dread is reeling. I’m looking up at the ceiling. Something’s there though it’s something I can’t see. I felt it first when it went right through me. I shivered then because it felt so cold. The room is frigid. What do I behold? The ceiling fan is spinning round and round. It’s not turned on! Is something here earth-bound? Is there a ghost gazing down at me in my fright? Is it something wicked that visits me this night? Or is it an old soul trapped and as scared as I? Oh, that I could see it and look it in the eye. Suddenly the spinning of the fan has stopped. Something from the ceiling to the floor has dropped. I pick up a brooch that in a picture of my great-grandma I had viewed. By the brooch her death deemed accidental is with murder’s chill imbued.

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Date: 4/14/2025 5:07:00 PM
Good Job! Ed
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Date: 4/8/2025 6:15:00 PM
Enjoyed the drama/suspense growing - goosebumps at the end, Andrea. We both posted writes for this contest today. I enjoyed your much. Mail. Love, CayCay
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Date: 4/8/2025 1:44:00 PM
for a long, i was hitchcocked!...a gothic treat, andie
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/8/2025 4:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette
Date: 4/8/2025 12:11:00 PM
Chilling and gripping, Andrea till the end.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/8/2025 4:20:00 PM
Thanks.iove your comment.
Date: 4/8/2025 11:45:00 AM
Spooky!! You got me with this thriller. Good luck in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/8/2025 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Eileen
Date: 4/8/2025 11:13:00 AM
- Exciting ... nothing to fear, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2025 10:33:00 AM
Great poem. GL in contest.
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Date: 4/8/2025 10:00:00 AM
Nice one Andrea. Best of luck in the contest
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