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National Poetry Month

River, Heart, Gaze, Eclipse, Lush, Tender ------------------------------------- A gentle flowing RIVER reflecting an ECLIPSED moon no tides, no pretended pull, unlike influenced ocean flows TENDERLY not hurting dear lives depending on her LUSH vibrant gulmohar trees stand sentinel banking her where greenish feathery leaves sway to give full shade decor They speak in new love whispers, meaningless sweet so nothings Oh! Tired song birds sleep-perching light on frail branches of trees Embrace lovers' ambience, a lullaby to HEART'S fill Stars GAZE in combined wonder at glistening mild river Somewhere near, a lonely heart immersed in soothing music Asks the cool breeze to carry harmonics and secret notes listeners hear, walkers walk towards divine melody

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Date: 4/19/2025 5:44:00 AM
A worthy piece that I'm so proud to have in this contest! Thank you for entering! Xo
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Date: 4/14/2025 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading this write. Have a wonderful day/week with your win...........
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Date: 4/15/2025 8:27:00 PM
Thank you dear poet for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you very much for the good wishes and blessings dear friend.
Date: 4/14/2025 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations. I love the rhythm and mood of your piece. Happy Poetry Month!
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Date: 4/15/2025 8:26:00 PM
Thank you dear friend for your kind visit and sweet words, am glad you liked it. Happy poetry month to you dear poet, be blessed.

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