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Ghost/Box, Shiver/Gaze, Cold/Wicked ~~~~ The Spectre of a Bride ~~~~ It looked just like a quiet place Though *cold and dark inside I’d scorned all the haunting tales Of a *ghostly spirit bride I saw it hanging in the room A cob web? old and stale? But as I *gazed through dusky gloom I saw a wedding veil Beneath the veil a small pinched face *Shivered with cold dead eyes And from her pale and bloodless lips She uttered whimp’ring cries A crimson stain was on her dress She clutched a dripping knife And on the floor a body lay New husband of this wife I’d heard, of course. But not believed The things that people said How the *wicked groom betrayed his bride And how she stabbed him dead But now she’s *boxed inside this house Where she can find no peace For the girl who hanged for murder The horrors never cease I left this sad demented house I left with no goodbye For now I know behind these walls A girl will ever cry
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Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Love this dark, Halloweeney (?) tale Margaret. Eerie story so well told in rhyme. Congratulations! :)
Layne Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations! A sad tale but an enjoyable read.
Woods Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 7:51 AM
I'm so glad you entered.. this is a top fav for me! Congratulations! Xo
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April 18, 2025 at 4:16 AM
Thank you Crystol for you lovely comment. Cheers
Delaney Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 12:59 PM
WOW You concocted a great story from your word choices with an effortless flow. Should place high.
Foster Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:01 AM
Thank you Suzanne. I am pleased you liked it and took time to comment. Cheers.
Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Whoa!! That is a very enlightening one, Margaret. Scary also. It has good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Sara K
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April 3, 2025 at 12:02 AM
Many thanks Sara. I am pleased you read this and commented. It is much appreciated. Cheers.
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