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nb The Canadian national anthem includes the line "Our home and native land".

My home on native land I stole that from a T-shirt Gotta give credit Where credit is due Canada 'eh Kanata Iroquois for settlement or village And here's where I slip in pillage Pardon my digression Subjugation segregation And bad first impression Gotta give credit where credit is due I remember being proud of a beret in blue 2018.08.21 Composed for Brahn Bailey's (your) Country 'tis of thee Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2018 5:17:00 PM

I was wondering the country you were from. This was a good one for me to find out!! Nicely done.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/25/2018 8:15:00 AM

Explains the colo"u"r of my humo"u"r no? ;) xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2018 4:40:00 PM

Your wit and insight shines as per usual, MM. Ty for the love and knowledge this lovely poem ink splashes. Love and joy always.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/30/2018 7:06:00 AM

I do love my home~land. Thank you my friend. Love and harmony, xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/26/2018 3:24:00 PM

Well, learn enough history and all illusions are shattered. … In the end, The Earth belongs to the Lord, and its fullness thereof, as King David once wrote. … We are mere guests on this terra forma, and it behooves us to remember that … Good luck in the contest, my friend!! ~ Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/27/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. Yeah, we belong to the earth, not the other way around. I doubt this will place but I'm no less happy with it how it came together, depends entirely on the judge, and that's ok. My muse has spoken ;) Love and warmth my friend, xomo!

Chris Green

Date: 8/22/2018 3:39:00 PM

I am not familiar with the blue beret but I love your poem. Everything comes with good and bad...hopefully the good is prevalent. If that makes any sense. :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/22/2018 4:28:00 PM

The Blue Beret- UN Peace Keepers, Canadians world renown, once upon a time. There sure is a lot of good, but the peace keeping multicultural national pride I developed young has been tarnished. Ah, ignorance is bliss comes to mind ;) Thank you my friend :) xomo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/22/2018 10:36:00 AM

Important things well said, good write.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/22/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence, xomo