Nathan

He was one of the good ones,
The best of the best.
He had gone into danger
At his nation's request.
He was not there to fight
Only there to rebuild;
Too young and too good
And too brave to be killed.

He is one of too many
Who've gone to Iraq 
To help protect freedom
But will not be back.
His parents are proud 
To have raised such a one;
A beautiful, dutiful, 
Courageous son.

His loved ones  are in tears.
Their loss is immense.
That he's not coming back
Just doesn't make sense.
Some are spared, some are taken,
God only knows why.
He took our love with him
When his turn to die.


Placed no. 1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bark Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:40 AM
congrats on your win sir...i love these types of poems...they tell a story but still bring you to tears...well i must go...im supposed to be studying for a science test >.< thanks again for your write :)
Ali Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:07 PM
such a moving write. Congrats on your win.
Villanueva Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:28 AM
great win...with this terrific write....awesome! CONGRATULATIONS! well deserved win on the contest...*-*junjun
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July 14, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your number 1 in my contest! Thank you for entering your awesome poem in my contest and also supporting my contest. have yourself a great and wonderful night. Sorry for the late congrats,..p.d.
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July 14, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your winning top bill with this trmendous tribute to your friends son.Having read this at his funeral you must be proud to have it polished off with these credentials. I didn`t know that it was in the same contest as one of my poems until now .. Bless up . Paul
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July 14, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your winning top bill with this trmendous tribute to your friends son.Having read this at his funeral you must be proud to have it polished off with these credentials. I didn`t know that it was in the same contest as one of my poems until now .. Bless up . Paul
Beadnall Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your winning top bill with this trmendous tribute to your friends son.Having read this at his funeral you must be proud to have it polished off with these credentials. I didn`t know that it was in the same contest as one of my poems until now .. Bless up . Paul
Williams Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:59 AM
What a stunning write. so sad that a first place entry came from such circumstances, but a worthy winner. thought are with you x
Taylor Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Sorry for your loss, Joyce. My condolences. Congrats on your 1st Place. Excellent piece. luv Ralph
Susan Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:20 AM
congratulations on your 1st place win! a very powerful write. sorry this happened to you. hugs.
K. Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:38 AM
This is such a moving and poignant dedication to a brave man, Joyce...my heart goes out to his loved ones... super congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations Joyce for your win in the contest "Dedication Poems" sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol
Long Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:11 AM
congrats joyce with this exceptional win cory
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win with this stirring and touching write my friend..luv..
La France Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Francine a beautiful dedication poem to a brave man, well done and congratulations on your deserved first place in Pd's contest~~
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July 13, 2011 at 4:22 AM
A wonderful tribute and win for you...Touching words my deat Joyce...luv Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 3:54 AM
My conmgratulations on this first place win in the contest of p.d., Joyce
Puddifoot Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 3:08 AM
congrats on your 1st place win in the dedication contest, a very poignant and thought-provoking write, showing the devastating impact of war on innocent people...
Ramage Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 2:31 AM
Congratulations on such a touching poem. Lee
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January 30, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Joyce, this tribute is so well-deserved by Nathan and all the other young people that our nation has sent to war. May his soul rest in peace and God comfort his loved ones' hearts. I still ask, is it worth their lives? Is this going to stop our enemies from hating us? We don't even know these peoples' mentality. I will never believe that a certain foreign government does not know where Osama Ben Laden is. It is impossible. Peace, Audrey
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January 29, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Dear Joyce, I am sorry this happened in your family. When you say "his parents" do you mean he is your parents' son or your own son? I imagine he was your son or perhaps a grandson, right? Goodness, did this happen very recently? I am so sorry for your loss, Joyce. And you honored him well with your poem. I love that name Nathan too. It was one of my choices I had picked in case I had another son. I bet he was a wonderful man. LUv, andrea
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