nascent Haiku 209

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blue shadows laden boughs snow coldness 1/14/2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2024 3:34:00 PM

Hello Eve, yes winter is cold. colder than others. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2024 7:15:00 AM

Creative and awesome design. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/15/2024 1:16:00 AM

We have no snow, but it is so cold these days. Lovely write. Hugs.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/14/2024 7:13:00 PM

Awh, this is such a gorgeous haiku, beautiful Eve.. Love the imagery you've painted with poetic elegance, describing 'blue shadows' and 'snow coldness' so impeccably within few words.. Ahh, I always love your haiku poems.. Keep writing and shining, sending light & many best wishes your way! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/14/2024 4:16:00 PM

a delightful Haiku with beautiful imagery! Bitter cold here in Texas for the next few days....no beautiful snow...just cold. Nicely done...hugs, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2024 11:18:00 AM

A beautiful image in your haiku Eve. Snow forecast this week in the uk Love to see it and thankfully I'm retired and can watch from indoors. Hope you're keeping well. Tom