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Narrow Escape

NARROW ESCAPE At eve, me and hubby on nice car drive in remote tourist spot to be explored. Dusk on misty mask ready to arrive. Haply found Victorian house beside road. Walked making way through wild weeds, thorny bush . to watch half-closed broken door, odd shaped. Both curious, carefully tried to push A heavy wooden chunk fell, I escaped. In dense dark crescent Moon peeped through window, entered the hall turning ghostly gibbous glowing on ceiling where resting black widow. Spider jumped chasing us looked furious. Giant black cat running after macro mouse. Puzzled n bewildered, we rushed in hurry. I was horrified and lost my rescuer spouse. In the road no trace of car or hubby. Haunted house scary daft and surreal. I ran and ran till I reached our motel. All in festive mood, cool calm cordial. Found my dear husband enjoying cocktail. 08/17/18

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Date: 9/16/2018 8:24:00 PM
I'm a little late, Anisha, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 9/5/2018 11:54:00 AM
Anisha congratulations on your win in my contest with this creepy tale with a fun ending, well done !
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Date: 9/1/2018 8:29:00 PM
I loved your suprise ending! There is helpful hubby who left you behind to fend for yourself! Made me giggle Anisha. Love the combination of fear and humor. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 9/1/2018 12:47:00 PM
Saved by hubby...lol Nice write, Anisha...Congrats on your placement!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/1/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks charles for appreciation. Best Wishes.
Date: 8/19/2018 9:58:00 AM
Lol..A haunting tale Anisha..best wishes
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Date: 9/1/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Joseph. Warm Wishes.

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